(office interior) vray for sketchup

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(office interior) vray for sketchup

Post by jhames joe albert infante on Thu Nov 27, 2008 6:54 am

1.view from door

2.view from 2nd side

3.third side


exam kopoto sa opisina..eto po tlga ung unag nrender kong interior..

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Re: (office interior) vray for sketchup

Post by novice on Thu Nov 27, 2008 2:20 pm

minor comments lang boss, imho
>over burn yung ibang surface mo
>too much glossy yung wood flooring
>overall astig parin ang su+vray mo. thumbsup keep it up!

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Re: (office interior) vray for sketchup

Post by ERICK on Fri Nov 28, 2008 12:33 am

im quite bothered with your scene... too messy for an office IMHO... just wait with other masters comments here... good practice

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Re: (office interior) vray for sketchup

Post by jarul on Fri Nov 28, 2008 12:39 am

ok naman sir..comment lang.
ang dami namang wall lamp nyan na sa tingin ko sobra na yata..imho lang po
i agree w bos erick, nasobrahan lng yata ng abobots

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Re: (office interior) vray for sketchup

Post by jhames joe albert infante on Sat Nov 29, 2008 1:51 am

i nagree po sa lahat ng comments hehe
kya nman maraming ilaw din kc di nako gmamit ng invicble light sa paligid..
salamat po uli inuman na

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Re: (office interior) vray for sketchup

Post by dickie_ilagan on Sat Nov 29, 2008 5:29 am

color schemes black and brown at medyo nagtatapat pa
making some area can't be seen and cover for comments...
overrun by lights too... siguro less a bit especially those hanging lamps....

the rest ok...
post more... good job
Very Happy Smile

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Re: (office interior) vray for sketchup

Post by mikaztro on Sat Nov 29, 2008 6:37 am

Hi James! Some nitpick comments:

IMAGE 1:
render: render looks good in my opinion. just avoid using toomany lights and wood finishes.
design: excessive use of downlight, sconce and pinlights. cove lights and mirrorized ceiling looks ok. Your room looks like an art studio or gallery more than an office. Maybe, that's your concept. Anyway, offices should be simple and not full of clutter on the walls.

IMAGE 2:
render:lights are a bit over burned but still looks fine to me.
design: I'd prefer the walls to be two toned only. I'd also remove the lines(yellow ones + wood), boxes and make it more simpler.

IMAGE 3:
render: same comments above.
design: same

Overall, you did a good job! A little bit of tweaking here and there and you're off to go. I'm sure given enough time, you'll make this a masterpiece.

Regards,

Mike

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Re: (office interior) vray for sketchup

Post by nomeradona on Sat Nov 29, 2008 6:44 am

so bale to yung nauna mung render. so sigurado pasado kaagad... as for the scene, i think a bit busy though.

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newby po..

Post by maxS2pid on Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:00 am

galeng sketchup?!,,ung sa design lng..too bc.. hippie

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