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Taytay Apt.

Post by kinej on Fri May 21, 2010 7:06 am

My first collaboration work with my dad
and my first design that will be built.

3dsmax2010-vray-Ps

c&c's are welocome


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Re: Taytay Apt.

Post by markitekdesign on Fri May 21, 2010 7:13 am

=bro the lower part of the bldg is too dark
=work on glass reflection
=minimize the plant in front
=good luck to your 1st project

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Re: Taytay Apt.

Post by kinej on Fri May 21, 2010 7:18 am

Re: Taytay Apt.

New post by markitekdesign Today at 3:13 pm
=bro the lower part of the bldg is too dark
=work on glass reflection
=minimize the plant in front
=good luck to your 1st project



oonga nasobrahan ng plants sa harapan...pangtakip sa horizon line..
sa darkness niya di ko lam i adjust sa Ps..sumasabay kasi yung sa taas..kaya pag light na yung ilalim puti na lahat sa taas...
Ps tips naman bro.

salamat bro..

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Re: Taytay Apt.

Post by nicotinefreeman on Fri May 21, 2010 7:45 am

imho lang po sir...sir yung shadow yata ng tree sa harap na wall surface masyadong disturbing... composition is good.. minimalist na minimalist ang dating.. i like the stone veneer sa harap sir pero mas maganda siguro kung na illuminate pa ng konti para lumabas yung material & texture since its your focal point if im not mistaken... keep it up bro! nice one though! 2thumbsup 2thumbsup 2thumbsup

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Re: Taytay Apt.

Post by kinej on Sat May 22, 2010 10:24 am

Re: Taytay Apt.

New post by nicotinefreeman Yesterday at 3:45 pm
imho lang po sir...sir yung shadow yata ng tree sa harap na wall surface masyadong disturbing... composition is good.. minimalist na minimalist ang dating.. i like the stone veneer sa harap sir pero mas maganda siguro kung na illuminate pa ng konti para lumabas yung material & texture since its your focal point if im not mistaken... keep it up bro! nice one though! 2thumbsup 2thumbsup 2thumbsup


salamat bro...oo nga madilim yung veneer...may konting kintab pa dapat yan...kaso di lumabas..

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Re: Taytay Apt.

Post by akoy on Sat May 22, 2010 12:08 pm

alisin na lang yung tree na nag cacause ng shadow
parang lumulutang yung building sa right side
plant sa harap

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Re: Taytay Apt.

Post by CNgarcia on Sat May 22, 2010 2:38 pm

follow the comments ng mga masters Very Happy

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Re: Taytay Apt.

Post by allnem on Sat May 22, 2010 2:53 pm

nice 2thumbsup

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