3-storey commercial building

pashare lang po mga masters... proposed commercial building po dito sa san fndo pamp..
c&c are welcome tnx! god bless..

Looks good...
---Your building doesn't match your BG tilt, a simple cam correction would suffice...
---What is the red stuff on top made of; plastic?... Some polycarb would substitute nicely...
---Car tires still look burned like in your previous posts; or is it a preference?...
---Green elements are blocking the commercial establishments; which defeats the whole "commercial" intent...

Design is by?...

Just to add on the comments of my idol,
-find a better road map and provide ramp, pano nakaakyat yung tatlong car dun?
Design is great. I'll wait for your update sir.

Add ko na din sir yung car sa left & right side obvious na obvious...i think enough na yung sa right na red car.keep posting sir!

nice design sir.

cloud20 wrote:Looks good...
---Your building doesn't match your BG tilt, a simple cam correction would suffice...
---What is the red stuff on top made of; plastic?... Some polycarb would substitute nicely...
---Car tires still look burned like in your previous posts; or is it a preference?...
---Green elements are blocking the commercial establishments; which defeats the whole "commercial" intent...

Design is by?...

thanks sir cloud...
---- yup first time ko lang kasi mag tilt ng building and i guess im not that bad for a first timer.. pero syempre noted parin yun sir.thanks
---- sir bale yung red stuff is made of cladding.. yun kasi ang prefrd ng architect.. thanks sa suggestion sir
---- sa tires hindi ko alam bakit ganyan sya lumilitaw sir siguro sadyang ganyan lng sya sir? maybe sa sun ko or cam...
---- about sa green elements i respect your own ideas sir para sa scene na to, imho lang po i think may kanya kanya tayong perception
or ideas pagdating sa ganitong bagay...which is true naman po sir i think sa pagkakadesign ng commercial establishment
na to sir ay parang semi-open type building sya and enough naman po siguro yung big signage sa labas para makita or
mabasa what kind of stalls yung nasa loob sir.. yun lang po ang akin...

it is designd by archt samPang, im sorry i forgot to include it..
maraming salamt sir cloud sa pagdaan and time sa pag comments.. noted po lahat ng sinabi nyo...

ARIST wrote:Just to add on the comments of my idol,
-find a better road map and provide ramp, pano nakaakyat yung tatlong car dun?
Design is great. I'll wait for your update sir.

yup sir noted po yung road map. and i guess better map narin para sa ramp.. sir nakaakyat yung 3 car dun kasi dumaan sila sa ramp.. hehe.. mapping issue para sa ramp again.
thanks for dropping by sir and appreciation

brodger wrote:Add ko na din sir yung car sa left & right side obvious na obvious...i think enough na yung sa right na red car.keep posting sir!

noted po sir.. thanks sa suggestion... pero nakukulangan pa nga ako sir sa mga abubots like cars na nilagay ko eh.. since sa mc arthur highway ang site. mas gusto ko pa sana na magmukha tlgang very busy ang scene.. kaya for me ok lang siguro yung cars sa left and right to show or prove nga na very busy ang scene ..
thanks for dropping by sir

bakugan wrote:nice design sir.

master bagukan maraming salamat and sa pagdaan..

cloud20 wrote:Looks good...
---Your building doesn't match your BG tilt, a simple cam correction would suffice...
---What is the red stuff on top made of; plastic?... Some polycarb would substitute nicely...
---Car tires still look burned like in your previous posts; or is it a preference?...
---Green elements are blocking the commercial establishments; which defeats the whole "commercial" intent...

Design is by?...

i agree sir sa sinabi ni sir cloud... nice..

@Dabuy: ah, Arch. Angelo Sampang? Figures... Tell him I said hi. And to the wifey too Narzen... Tell him if I were the one renting space on the second floor I'd ask the building owner to tear down that green stuff as my costumers can't see my store. That's my opinion, honest or not.

cloud20 wrote:@Dabuy: ah, Arch. Angelo Sampang? Figures... Tell him I said hi. And to the wifey too Narzen...

that would be no problem sir cloud, i'll extend your regards to him and his wife..

nice render cabalen agree with the mastah cloud comments

agree din ako sa comments ni cloud,,,,mas ok pa siguro kung wala na yung green,red at yung may guhit guhit sa bandang kaliwa...rendering output is not bad!

-nice work sir!... comment, nasabi na..