residential house

Hello mga master! post ko lang po practice 3d ko. paki C&C nalang po para ma improve. nag cracrash kasi laptop ko pag high poly gamit sa cars kaya pasensya n po s lowpoly cars... Thanks![img] Uploaded with ImageShack.us[/img][img][/img]

medyo madami ang dapat iimprove dito sir
- glass reflection
- sidewalk & road is too plane..hanap ka ng magandang map & lagay ng bump
- the sky..tingin po kayo sa ibang post dito sir kung pano pi nila sinset-up ang sky for bg
- lumilipad na mga dahon
- alisin ang orange na car
- mababasaang nasa main entry kung uulan..wala po ba talagang roof dun?
- colorbleeding ang grass
- mapping sa carport
- yung grass,umangat..sa displacement yata yan
- palitan mo nalang yung bricks sa firewall,mas ok pa kung same sa color ng main wall
- not sure w/ the baluster,,out of place yata sa overall design
- matapang ang dating color blue na gutter..

update nyo po ito sir..practice naman po ito..tapos e apply nyo po ang comments ng mga kasamahan natin dito..then post nyo po ulit.
para malaman po natin ang progress..

ok sir salamat!!! kaso my problema ako sa mga materials ko nag eerrror kagaya ng road ko wet asphalt yan pero naging plain gray sya. pati sa firewall puros plain. Thanks sa comment Sir jarul!

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sir ok naman yung render try to choose other type of sky for sure mag iimprove yung image. thank you

nice one bro.... konting kalikot pa.... itaas mo camera mo... eye level much better....! BG din cguro.... goodluck bro....

follow jarul's comment...adjust your shaders...remove that ies in the carport, since you have that projected beam at the carport might as well use that as support for porch covering or you can use polycarbonate covering and also replace the baluster with modern one....nice design though...update mo sir using different material finish....

nice render sir..konting practice pa..makukuha mo rin yan!!

Salamat mga master!!!