Simple Living Room

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Hello guys this is just a simple scene I made, my goal on this one is I want to focuse on artificial lighting and less on natural light. If you have some critiques please let me know.

Thank you.






Render with a lady (done on post-work)





Yesterday, one of my friend here in cgp asked me if I can give him the scene setup of my latest post (this post) so last night I made some screen grab and turned it into one single pdf file, at post ko rin dito baka makatulong sa mga katulad kong baguhan.

ito po yung link download nyo nalang po. http://www.mediafire.com/?r9fb1do0ldyqs5r

great lighting bro congrats! my comment would be for the composition.
- those sticks on your base shall be more thinner bro imho.
- since ginamit mo na ung color palette na chocolate brown or dark brown as framing (curtain and piano) it will be better kung un na rin ung ginamit mong color sa base and center coffee table.
- bakit merong sindi ung candles? i guess kung you really intend to put lights on it better turn-off those ceiling lights, and night scene siguro. perhaps, dof mo na lang.
- i love the leather material
- have you tried putting 2 pcs. single + your 1 large sofa?
- ung fixed glass sa right and left side ng tv mo, i guess it's not ideal kasi pag nanood ka sa araw medyo hindi magiging ok ang viewing experience considering walang curtain ung fixed glass.
- i admire you for having the patience sa pag-arranged ng mga libro, hindi masyadong halata ang repetition wag lang kikilatisin, weakness ko yang libro hehehe.
- the idea of putting the lady was great, though hindi sana blur kasi nakatigil naman sya. and mas ok kung sa kaliwa sya nakaharap for the framing.
- not sure about the size of the tv. para syang monitor bro.

hope makatulong

laki na ng pinag bago mo bro...color combination kanalang mag focus,..maganda na yong mga gawa mo ha...minimalist bagay dito bro...black ang white lang...IMHO...kagaya ng ginawa mo nung una...

nice dre. take note ung kay sir bokkins

rtp_23 wrote:galing sir..nice lighting..ganda!

Thank you for the kind compliment sir rtp.

bokkins wrote:Astig ang rendering mo dito bro. Lalo na ang babae mo sa post work! Galing. May comment lang ako sa composition. Grand piano should be respected sa designs. That's why it's called Grand kasi it needs a grand space. It will only look expensive pag spacious, pag sa mga ganito ka sikip, mukhang cheap imation grand piano sya from china.

Sorry po sa late reply, salamat po sir Neil sa komento nyo, about po sa grand piano mali talaga ako dun kasi ginawa kong second priority since it's out of focus from the camera, siguro made in China nga yun hehehe peace po..

Next time I'll see to it that I'll more attention to grand furniture so it won't look out of place.

Salamat po sa panahon na binigay nyo sa pagsilip dito.

Valiant wrote:great lighting bro congrats! my comment would be for the composition.
- those sticks on your base shall be more thinner bro imho.
- since ginamit mo na ung color palette na chocolate brown or dark brown as framing (curtain and piano) it will be better kung un na rin ung ginamit mong color sa base and center coffee table.
- bakit merong sindi ung candles? i guess kung you really intend to put lights on it better turn-off those ceiling lights, and night scene siguro. perhaps, dof mo na lang.
- i love the leather material
- have you tried putting 2 pcs. single + your 1 large sofa?
- ung fixed glass sa right and left side ng tv mo, i guess it's not ideal kasi pag nanood ka sa araw medyo hindi magiging ok ang viewing experience considering walang curtain ung fixed glass.
- i admire you for having the patience sa pag-arranged ng mga libro, hindi masyadong halata ang repetition wag lang kikilatisin, weakness ko yang libro hehehe.
- the idea of putting the lady was great, though hindi sana blur kasi nakatigil naman sya. and mas ok kung sa kaliwa sya nakaharap for the framing.
- not sure about the size of the tv. para syang monitor bro.

hope makatulong

Sir salamat po sa reply,
-kaya po di dark brown yung center table kasi tinugma ko siya sa beige color ng sofa hehehe mala ata ako hehehe
-about the lighted candles, wala lang po baka lang makapag-bigay ng drama look/peaceful mood
yung apoy po ng candle ps ko po ginawa.
-sorry din po sa ibang mali ko dito.
-books, hehehe medyo kinalikot ko yung orientation at pinagpalit palit ko yung mga books.
-about the lady, yun din sabi ng kuya ko sana di siya blurry para makita, kasi dami rin akong nakikita sa net na ganyan na blurry yung mga ps na tao pag interior.
-size of the t.v., wide screen? hehehe yan din sabi ng kuya ko medyo di raw tama yung ratio and proportion ko sa t.v.

thank you for the very educational critique and oh! laling tulong po yan.

markitekdesign wrote:laki na ng pinag bago mo bro...color combination kanalang mag focus,..maganda na yong mga gawa mo ha...minimalist bagay dito bro...black ang white lang...IMHO...kagaya ng ginawa mo nung una...

salamat sir mark sa pagdaan naku ganun pa din po ako hito nakatingin pa rin sa langit. hehehe

pakunat wrote:nice dre. take note ung kay sir bokkins

woah?! sir pakunat di ko to inaasahan Idol, salamat po sa pagsilip. opo tatandaan ko po yung advice ni sir neil.

at last nag post rin si idol hihihi..long time no visit...

galing naman tlga hihihi...keep it up sir!!

and just to add to their comments, it's really distracting for me seeing those two base while watching TV at the left sofa.
Lighting is nice.Galing!

galing kabayan laki improved mo!!

Wala bang "like" button gaya sa facebook?
Very nice, I've seen you "grow" here in cgpinoy. And you improve in almost every post. Keep it up.

ED_nesperos_14 wrote:at last nag post rin si idol hihihi..long time no visit...

galing naman tlga hihihi...keep it up sir!!

oy ed, salamat sa pagsilip sa munti kong post, bilited happy birthday nga pala, sorry di kita nabati.

yaug_03 wrote:and just to add to their comments, it's really distracting for me seeing those two base while watching TV at the left sofa.
Lighting is nice.Galing!

Woah?! idol yaug salamat po sa komento dami po akong natutunan sa mga post nyo. noted po comment nyo.

arkibons wrote:galing kabayan laki improved mo!!

kuya bons, salamat sa komento mo... hehehe

logikpixel wrote:Wala bang "like" button gaya sa facebook?
Very nice, I've seen you "grow" here in cgpinoy. And you improve in almost every post. Keep it up.

naluluha na tuloy ako sa word na GROW huhuhuhuhuhu salamat po sa lahat....

Yesteday, one of my friend here in cgp asked me if I can give him the scene setup of my latest post (this post) so last night I made some screen grab and turned it into one single pdf file, at post ko rin dito baka makatulong sa mga katulad kong baguhan.

ito po yung link download nyo nalang po. http://www.mediafire.com/?r9fb1do0ldyqs5r