4 beds 2storey residential

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share ko lang project ng papa ko..
workflow: cad9, max9 + vray and cs8

wow ...nice work sir....

salamat po master... pina render lang po sakin ni papa ko kasi nag aboad na yung architect niya..... mabuhay po tau mga master

you did this or your papa?
- work on your grass too much displacement
- glass to reflective for my taste
- some part of the roof are damage, no ridge on other parts too

ako po nagrender. baguhan lang po ako sa max master. salamat po sa comment pagbubutihan ko po nextime

ganyan ba roof gusto nila sir?
grass medyo malaki map scale niya
parang ng color bleed sa ceiling
parang bitin din ako sa sky IMHO lang naman

Neil Joshua Rosario wrote:ako po nagrender. baguhan lang po ako sa max master. salamat po sa comment pagbubutihan ko po nextime

hindi po ako master, wow ang bilis mo matuto

good day po sir. comments ko lang
-masyado malaki po yung grain ng grass mu sir adjust mu yung displacement niya
-roof sir kulang ng ridge sa right side
- kung pwede sir lagyan ng gutter mas maganda (imho lang)pero kugn gusto ng owner ng free fall , pero just advise her\him na masisira yung landscape niya kung meron
design is great and the render nice.
thanks for sharing sir.

bat magkaiba yung ridge mo sir? yung green parang GI pero yung gutter parang clay. yun lang po!

comments:
- grass mentioned already
- medyo masakit din sa mata yung yellow floral na nag overburn sa may harapan.
- IMHO base column are too large and too bumpy
- Glass reflection nabanggit na rin
- add some wall flashing dun sa mga roof mo na nag connect sa walls to add some details.
- rigde cap? (IMHO) I think hindi na kailangan ng ridge cap if you only use rib type or ord. corrugated as panel use ridge roll instead and I think mas maganda kung magka-kulay yung panel at mga bended accessories mo except for gutters.
- gutter.... IMHO if you used rib type or ordcorr as your panel mas maganda kung maglalagay ka ng gutter.. Except if owner's request.
- add some exterior lighting fixtures na rin..
- camera correction sir..

Thats all.. that's the spirit of newbie sir practice lang tayo ng practice sir.. we're the same newbie anyway.. thanks for sharing..

nasabi na nila tungkol sa grass at window..ayus yung foliage ahm, sa design maganda yung building pangit yung roof material hindi sila bagay,, suggest ko is spanish tile, or dura tile..

To make it complete, pa add na rin lighting fixture sa garden, wall, and ceiling. Ayos yung texture ng punong-kahoy.