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Post by brodger on Sun Oct 03, 2010 10:25 pm

First topic message reminder :

Pa-singit lang po mga ka-CGP's...
Done in Acad+3dmax des2009+vraysp4+CS3
Actually ito po yung una kong minodel before my first post here..kaso sobrang plain at nabibigatan na rig ko..so pinalitan ko..ng medyo matuto mag-optimize ito binalikan ko at minodify ng kaunti. Singit ko lang po ito kasi may ginagawa me na medyo modern naman.


RAW image - for reference and comparison.


With PS - sana mabigyan niyo po ako ng guide kung paano magPost pro ng tama,heheh.

Pa-comment na lang po and suggestion's..even criticisms..you're very much welcome!
TIA sa mga dadaan,sisilip at magko-comment! mabuhay ang CGP! Godbless us all!

UPDATE: base sa comments po..pacensiya na po sa mga flaw's..pa CnC's na lang po ulit. Thank's and Godbless us all!


RAW IMAGE


with PS

UPDATE na naman po:


night scene kuno...

bahala na po kayo mga ka- CGP's! mabuhay ang CGPinoy community!Godbless!


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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by brodger on Wed Oct 13, 2010 9:45 am

Update lang po mga ka-CGP's! TIA and Godbless us all! bahala na po kayo!

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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by 21guns on Wed Oct 13, 2010 10:43 am

tol parang nasunog na ata a
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by agent7 on Wed Oct 13, 2010 6:33 pm

updated sir ah! medyo dark pa sir ang shadow natin.....parehas tayong newbie sir eh....wait natin mga master!hehehe!
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by brodger on Wed Oct 13, 2010 9:37 pm

maximus aurelius wrote:wow ang galing ng klasmyt ko.. idol gud kita dati pah..comment ko lang partz yung roof ridge roll natin sa carport parang big.. hehe post more brod.

Salamat sa pagsilip pre..heheh..beware lang sa textspeak..tsamba lang yan,di pa stable settings ko,nagpapaturo pa tayo dito.noted yan bro! Smile
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by brodger on Wed Oct 13, 2010 9:43 pm

Salamat mga bro! paturo naman paano mapaliwanag ito na hindi masusunog at cool yung image..pati na rin sa reflection sa glass. nahirapan na ako nung ilagay ko sa harap yung vraysun.

Pa-help lang po mga ka-CGP's..lalo na sa mga master's..TIA and Godbless!
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by brodger on Fri Oct 15, 2010 1:42 am

2ND UPDATE po mga ka-CGP's...
Please drop naman your comments base on the images i posted for my improvement. Nahihirapan po akong pagandahin itong mga images ko. bale isang view lang ginamit ko para makita talaga yung difference ng bawat isa.

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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by arkibons on Mon Oct 18, 2010 11:05 pm

brodger wrote:2ND UPDATE po mga ka-CGP's...
Please drop naman your comments base on the images i posted for my improvement. Nahihirapan po akong pagandahin itong mga images ko. bale isang view lang ginamit ko para makita talaga yung difference ng bawat isa.

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Salamat po sa mga tumulong,alam niyo na po kung sinu-sino po kayo! mabuhay ang CGPinoy community!Godbless!

Add ko lang bro lessen mo pa ang light source mo!!! ok at HDRI sa invi mo hanap ka ng maganda!!!
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by kurdaps! on Tue Oct 19, 2010 1:11 am

Design is subjective so I leave it all to you. But if you allow me here are my suggestions:

- I would remove that two pillars on the entrance, too heavy proportionally.
-The garage roof better it is gable roof leaning on one side of the house going to the perimeter wall to compensate your main roof otherwise extend your balcony to the garage.
-If you have that columns on all corners enveloped with bricks, start it from gf going up. Now its seems that the upper level is separated from below.
-Plat box on the ground are heavy aesthetically, make it one level in one line.
-Transfer the lamps on the upper level to the wall.


For rendering, as they said on your last update..the intensity is too much lessen it. Add bumps on the garage floor texture and for the bitmaps reduce the blur from 1.0---. The front yard umbrella tent is alone, add chairs and table to complete it.

That's all bro, keep on rendering...you are improving na.

O ayan, nagkumento na ako...punta ka na sa EB sa susunod. Very Happy

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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by effreymm on Tue Oct 19, 2010 1:29 am

Sundin mo nalang payo mga beterano bro. Makukuha mo din yan matyagang practice lang.
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by brodger on Tue Oct 19, 2010 1:42 am

Wow ayos! heheh...ang tagal ko nang pangarap na makatikim ng komento ng ilan sa mga hinahangaan kong mga master's! It's a great pleasure for me mga master's!!

@ master arkibons..di ka naman galit sa lagay niyan,heheh..pasaway ano?nyeheheh..no prob'z sa next post ko apply ko na advise mo..try ko lang kasi gumawa from the scratch talaga.

@ master kurdap's..really appreciate your comment's..kahit napilitan ka lang,weheheh..joke lang po. Loobin next EB sama-sama tayo. Godbless po!

@ master effreymm..thank's din sa tulong niyo po..apply ko po next post loobin..

OT: sarap ng feeling madaanan ng mga master's! lalo akong nainspired,ehe! sa uulitin po!mabuhay ang CGP! Godbless!! ! !
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by chymera14 on Tue Oct 19, 2010 3:03 am

nice sir...ok na ok..practice pa lang po yan...post more po sir..
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by brodger on Tue Oct 19, 2010 3:34 am

chymera14 wrote:nice sir...ok na ok..practice pa lang po yan...post more po sir..

Salamat po sir Chymera sa pagdaan..,heheh..salamat din po sa tulong niyo! kaso di ko pa rin makuha eh,heheh..ang layo sa output niyo,weheheh..na-miss ko post mo sir ah! share more sir!Godbless!
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by brodger on Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:01 am

Update lang po..praktis po sa PS post pro.

Maraming salamat kay master arkibons sa pagshare kung papaano mgpost pro kahit papaano eh nagkaroon ako ng idea,kay master jumong at sir bakugan sa guidance, at sa mga ka-CGP lalo na kay sir Bokkins. Sa mga hindi na-mention daan na lang po kayo ulit at ng mapasalamatan ko kayo.(dami niyo eh,heheh)
pasensiya na update lang muna..medyo na-busy kuno. Smile
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by gaara on Mon Nov 15, 2010 12:22 pm

Ayun oh! improving na bro yung kutsi pahiran mo ng carpaint parang clay, good job!
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by maximus aurelius on Tue Nov 16, 2010 6:29 pm

ayos pare layo na ng narating mo.. master kana talaga.. ok yung latest pare
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by brodger on Tue Nov 16, 2010 10:28 pm

gaara wrote:Ayun oh! improving na bro yung kutsi pahiran mo ng carpaint parang clay, good job!
tol..maraming salamat sa pagdaan!naka-raytrace yan eh..try kung palitan kaso nahihirapan ako eh pued pahingi ng link ng tutorial nito?TIA po!
OT: kmusta po work?galing na ng modelling niyo bro!
maximus aurelius wrote:ayos pare layo na ng narating mo.. master kana talaga.. ok yung latest pare
heheh..seryoso ka brod?wahaha! anyways..maraming salamat po..really appreciate it..mahirap man pong tanggapin..eh nakakataba po ng puso.ehe.
OT: post ka na tol!ayos na mga banat's mo!
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by gaara on Tue Nov 16, 2010 11:46 pm

Tanggalin mo raytrace dagdag calculation lang yan right click > Vray scene converter then isolate mo yung car apply material dun sa mga visible sa mata kung wala kang carpaint pm mo ko.
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by brodger on Wed Nov 17, 2010 12:02 am

gaara wrote:Tanggalin mo raytrace dagdag calculation lang yan right click > Vray scene converter then isolate mo yung car apply material dun sa mga visible sa mata kung wala kang carpaint pm mo ko.

ok bro! try ko yan..galing naman..pm kita once ma-try ko na. dati nag convert ako naging black mat siya..dapat pala change mat na. thank's sa immediate response bro!
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by rhen on Wed Nov 17, 2010 9:19 am

nice ganda nung update. Smile
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by brodger on Thu Nov 18, 2010 8:17 am

rhen wrote:nice ganda nung update. Smile
maraming salamat sir rhen at nagustuhan niyo po..mabuhay ang CGP!Godbless! Smile
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by agent7 on Thu Nov 25, 2010 3:06 am

ganda ng update bro! try to check some of their advice makukuha mo na yan..
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by qnald on Thu Nov 25, 2010 4:18 am

ang ganda ng update sir yung car lang,.
pasensya na sir brodger VFSU user ako kaya alangan ako mag comment sa mga technical ng maxvray..
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by brodger on Thu Nov 25, 2010 4:42 am

agent7 wrote:ganda ng update bro! try to check some of their advice makukuha mo na yan..
Maraming salamat bro nagustuhan mo..mahina kasi makina natin eh..heheh..good luck sa atin bro!salamat sa Dios!

qnald wrote:ang ganda ng update sir yung car lang,.
pasensya na sir brodger VFSU user ako kaya alangan ako mag comment sa mga technical ng maxvray..

Maraming salamat sa pagdaan bro! walang problema iyan..noted yung sa car.Godbless CGP!
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by scanline on Thu Nov 25, 2010 4:56 pm

look nice...
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by kibikibu on Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:39 am

nice update sir ganda, ,
yung ridgecap mo sir sa carport malake para sakin, saka yung materials sa sidewalk sir parang naka angat sir, yung sa window nyo sir mas ok padin saakin yung merong refraction sa glass, sakin lang naman sir hehe,,saka sir kotse mo,,sana glossy sya parang maalikabok kasi,, Very Happy , thanks sa pm sir,, god bless..
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Re: Common 2 Sto. Resd'l House (Night Scene kuno) UPDATE 04 -2nd Post

Post by maningdada on Mon Nov 29, 2010 4:56 am

-nice update sir...
-siguro yung car nalang palitan para mas lalong gumanda.
-ridge cap malaki sir.
-kunting curtain sa mga windows.

nice mode nice lighting 2thumbsup
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