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Post by JefsM82 on Mon Jan 10, 2011 7:58 pm

Good Day! CGpians
Here's my second post i do hope you can give me some of your valuable insight for my improvement! Thanks in advance!

Work Flow:
Design Courtesy of my friend
3dsmax 2008 / 2009
Vray 1.47.02 / 1.5 sp 2
Photoshop 7
(Salamat po sa model ng sasakyan...nakuha ko sa free stuff dito sa CGP at sa mga tutorials.)

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Post by Rogan on Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:22 pm

mapping issue sir sa road atska roof. try to model the roof and try to play with shadow. yun lng sir.
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Post by zromel on Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:12 pm

Rogan wrote:mapping issue sir sa road atska roof. try to model the roof and try to play with shadow. yun lng sir.

i agree with sir rogan,
-bg did not match
-keep in touch lang dito sir,
we have here so many masters to help you
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Post by killerBEE on Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:18 pm

adjust lang po ng konti sir sa contrast.
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Post by vhychenq on Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:47 am

try to find a sky background na magmamatch sa scene.
lessen the light intensity,nasunog yung road map.
more contrast nga
try rendering with modeled plants
practice more on composition and modeling. Very Happy
tambay lang dito bro,dami kang matutunan.
post more.

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Post by JefsM82 on Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:26 am

Rogan wrote:mapping issue sir sa road atska roof. try to model the roof and try to play with shadow. yun lng sir.

Noted Sir! Salamat sa pagdaan.

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Post by JefsM82 on Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:30 am

vhychenq wrote:try to find a sky background na magmamatch sa scene.
lessen the light intensity,nasunog yung road map.
more contrast nga
try rendering with modeled plants
practice more on composition and modeling. Very Happy
tambay lang dito bro,dami kang matutunan.
post more.

Noted sir... Salamat po. Regarding po sa pag-gamit ng modeled na plants di po kasi mahandle ng laptop ko yung rendering pagnaresolve ko I-update ko po itong post ko na 'to. Thank you ulit.

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Post by killerBEE on Mon Jan 17, 2011 1:04 am

nice update bro
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Post by comgrapart on Mon Jan 17, 2011 5:42 pm

Nice update sir! add nalang siguro ng mga trees sa foreground at sa likod or gilid ng house para mabuhay yung scene..add na rin sir ng car (IMHO) thanks for sharing. keep it up thumbsup
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Post by kjraf_011 on Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:28 pm

Hindi po nakuha lahat ng cam mo yung subject mo sir, post more sir. Good Luck po
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Post by Galaites07 on Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:38 pm

might wanna use the new vray 2.0 for study as you are also using trial version. Mas mabilis sya.

http://www.chaosgroup.com/en/2/downloads.html?s=v-ray kailangan mo pala mag-register to be able to download.

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Post by JefsM82 on Wed Jan 19, 2011 12:45 am

comgrapart wrote:Nice update sir! add nalang siguro ng mga trees sa foreground at sa likod or gilid ng house para mabuhay yung scene..add na rin sir ng car (IMHO) thanks for sharing. keep it up

Noted Sir Thanks!

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Post by JefsM82 on Wed Jan 19, 2011 12:48 am

Galaites07 wrote:might wanna use the new vray 2.0 for study as you are also using trial version. Mas mabilis sya.

http://www.chaosgroup.com/en/2/downloads.html?s=v-ray kailangan mo pala mag-register to be able to download.

Salamat sa link Sir.

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Post by comgrapart on Wed Jan 19, 2011 10:19 am

Yan...nice, need more trees pa sir lagay pa kayo ng mga tress kay likog or gilid...try nyo lang sir. Very Happy
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