green house (literally)

Go down

green house (literally)

Post by arki_norie on Sat Feb 26, 2011 5:44 pm


hi guys this is my second try on max vray exterior presentation
practice lang po ong rendering
workflow: sketchup+max2010+vray
C&c are very much welcome po...

more power cgp... Smile



[img][/img]
avatar
arki_norie
CGP Newbie
CGP Newbie

Number of posts : 148
Age : 31
Location : manila
Registration date : 19/05/2009

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: green house (literally)

Post by phranq on Sat Feb 26, 2011 5:58 pm

dapat sa WIP section po ito.

*check your scale & proportion.
*study more on composition, materials & lighting
*wala cover between roof & roof ceiling.
*shadows are too dark.
*glass reflection.
*light leaks.

better to check our tutorial section para makakuha po tayo ng mga ideas & compare sa mga gawa ng iba dito para may reference po tayo.


goodluck.
avatar
phranq
CGP Guru
CGP Guru

Number of posts : 1208
Age : 38
Location : ****
Registration date : 17/06/2009

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: green house (literally)

Post by Neil Joshua Rosario on Sat Feb 26, 2011 6:38 pm

hi ma'am
-the shadow is to dark
-pascia board nawala
-add mor detail sa pagmomodel kasi yung ang nagpapabuhay ng model
-glass reflection bakit po ganyan

not max and vray makes your render nice. using imagination makes your render nice, max and vray is just an application.
avatar
Neil Joshua Rosario
CGP Guru
CGP Guru

Number of posts : 1827
Age : 27
Location : Bangus City
Registration date : 02/06/2010

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: green house (literally)

Post by toy28 on Sat Feb 26, 2011 7:18 pm

i agree with sir phranq. anyway wala atang fascia board?
avatar
toy28
CGP Apprentice
CGP Apprentice

Number of posts : 370
Age : 27
Location : Dakbayan sa Dabaw
Registration date : 05/02/2010

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: green house (literally)

Post by theomatheus on Sun Feb 27, 2011 9:39 pm

madilim po maam.taasan nyo dark multiplier nyo..,walang material ang roof.
reflection ng glass...mapapaganda mo pa ito maam=)
avatar
theomatheus
CGP Guru
CGP Guru

Number of posts : 1387
Age : 35
Location : planet obsidian panopticon
Registration date : 06/07/2009

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: green house (literally)

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum