INTERIOR (LIVING ROOM & T&B)

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INTERIOR (LIVING ROOM & T&B)

Post by fieyangcab on Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:18 pm

GOOD DAY PO MGA MAM/SIR. first time ko po itong mag post. sorry po kung may problema sa pag post ko. Mga masters, first timer pa po ako sa paggawa ng 3d at rendering, sana po matulungan nyo ako para ma improve ko pa po yung mga drawings ko. pa cc na lang po. maraming salamat mga mam/sir!

workflow: SU7 - 3ds Max2009+vray1.5

REVISION: (raw image) ito po yung inulit ko mga sir/mam. medyo marami pa rin kulang. sorry po low quality kasi nahihirapan na pc ko. still trying to figure out how to use 3ds max.. maraming salamat po sa mga advice nyo mga sir/mam!





LIVING ROOM




TOILET&BATHROOM


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Post by yaug_03 on Wed Mar 09, 2011 11:14 pm

not bad for a starter
my comments:
-BG manipulation
-pay attention to details
-as for the glass material, meron tutorial si Sir Bokkins hanapin mo na lang.

GI is good.
Composition is good.

Keep it up.
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Post by fieyangcab on Thu Mar 10, 2011 1:39 am

yaug_03 wrote:not bad for a starter
my comments:
-BG manipulation
-pay attention to details
-as for the glass material, meron tutorial si Sir Bokkins hanapin mo na lang.

GI is good.
Composition is good.

Keep it up.



maraming salamat po sir.. ill take that into consideration.

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Re: INTERIOR (LIVING ROOM & T&B)

Post by markro010 on Thu Mar 10, 2011 4:13 am

nice render sir..comment ko lang sa wood sa t&b naulit yung veneer.try to adjust it po pero ok to.. (imho)
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Post by adiktuz on Thu Mar 10, 2011 5:27 am

put bumps sa mga texture to make it better like ung sa sofa mukha kase syang marshmallow wash yung rendering mo adjust light yung texture ng trunk ng plant mo mukhang nawala try to learn more about lighting setup para mas maganda para di lumutang objects molike sa toilet mo nawala yung mga shadows if im not mistaken vray light na sphere gamit mo dito yung wood mo tiling sya find seamless textures sa internet yung shower area parang walang entrance design wise ok sya rendering and attention to details bro keep it up.....
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Post by fieyangcab on Thu Mar 10, 2011 6:50 am

adiktuz wrote:put bumps sa mga texture to make it better like ung sa sofa mukha kase syang marshmallow wash yung rendering mo adjust light yung texture ng trunk ng plant mo mukhang nawala try to learn more about lighting setup para mas maganda para di lumutang objects molike sa toilet mo nawala yung mga shadows if im not mistaken vray light na sphere gamit mo dito yung wood mo tiling sya find seamless textures sa internet yung shower area parang walang entrance design wise ok sya rendering and attention to details bro keep it up.....

maraming salamat po sir.. noted po lahat sir.. dami ko pong natutunan!

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Post by qcksilver on Thu Mar 10, 2011 7:40 am

Details nga bro, add ko lang
- window parang picture frames, glass need reflections and hindi halos nakadikit sa wall
- sana wala ng vertical lines ang tv wall hindi kasi maganda termination sa floor tile
- rug design out of place fir me
- agree with the sofa, put pillows and fabric material
- 2nd image nawala na shadow
- model ba tiles or mapping lang? malaki ang grout, hindi rin maganda pagkakalagay ng mirror dapat sakto sa lines ng tiles
- shower area dapat hindi pareho ang level ng floor,
- glass partition needs support
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Re: INTERIOR (LIVING ROOM & T&B)

Post by fieyangcab on Thu Mar 10, 2011 9:17 am

qcksilver wrote:Details nga bro, add ko lang
- window parang picture frames, glass need reflections and hindi halos nakadikit sa wall
- sana wala ng vertical lines ang tv wall hindi kasi maganda termination sa floor tile
- rug design out of place fir me
- agree with the sofa, put pillows and fabric material
- 2nd image nawala na shadow
- model ba tiles or mapping lang? malaki ang grout, hindi rin maganda pagkakalagay ng mirror dapat sakto sa lines ng tiles
- shower area dapat hindi pareho ang level ng floor,
- glass partition needs support

salamat ng marami bro! dami ko ng natutunan. consider ko to lahat advice mo.

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Post by BONE CRUSHER on Thu Mar 10, 2011 10:22 am

nasabi na siguro lahat, sa akin lang yung 1st image yung background hindi proportion. tsaka sa mga ilaw mas mganda cguro gumamit ka ng ies bro.
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Post by fieyangcab on Thu Mar 10, 2011 5:50 pm

BONE CRUSHER wrote:nasabi na siguro lahat, sa akin lang yung 1st image yung background hindi proportion. tsaka sa mga ilaw mas mganda cguro gumamit ka ng ies bro.

noted po sir! salamat..

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Re: INTERIOR (LIVING ROOM & T&B)

Post by dads3 on Sun Mar 13, 2011 1:56 pm

cool image1 sir ang ganda ng design thumbsup
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