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Post by EDMON242004 on Mon Mar 21, 2011 11:30 pm

Mga kaibigan ang aking ikalimang post, isang exterior rendering ng isang duplex residence, crits and comments po would be greatly appreciated.

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Post by neil_ on Mon Mar 21, 2011 11:56 pm

too bright roof.
textures sa walls para may play yung character.
camera correction pa..
more calm clouds, agaw pansin kasi.

nice render settings.
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Post by Neil Joshua Rosario on Tue Mar 22, 2011 12:18 am

parang walang material trunk mo sa tree
change the bg agaw pansin
roff tilespan mo sa likod bakit ganun kulay iba sa ridge
glass reflection lagyan mo ng kunti
fence column mo sa left side sa dineretso mo nlang para my partions sa fence
side walk continuious ba yan kahit sa harap ng bahay
sky nabitin ako naputol agad
add canopy para hindi directly mabasa pagumulan mga cars
change mo color ng moudlings mo para may drama
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Post by qnald on Tue Mar 22, 2011 1:22 am

anong work flow boss?..
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Post by EDMON242004 on Tue Mar 22, 2011 1:34 am

Salamat mga kaibigan sa c&c's, noted, noted & noted..
@Qnald, parehas ng dati SU+Vray4SU+PS

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Post by qnald on Wed Mar 23, 2011 12:36 am

ayun parang sobra lakas sun intensity pero may mga dark areas parin, laruin nyo yung lens shift sa camera settings boss para maayos ang verticals nyo, try nyo magstart sa 0.09 value para mas architecturally pleasing ang presentation.. photoshop ba yung mga planting sa likod? paki scaledown, parang malaki.. the rest ok na ok na..
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Post by thanthan on Wed Mar 23, 2011 12:43 am

galing nito. ah, comment lang, over bright lang sir.
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