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Post by MrHarimani on Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:34 am

halo all...i am new here...sorry bad english...lived in malaysia for almost 3 years...my recent proposal for hospital at penang..please comment.....



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Post by archshade02 on Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:39 am

welcome sir.nice start
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Post by MrHarimani on Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:41 am

thx....critic or comment please???......

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Post by kurdaps! on Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:41 am

What a ramp! Shocked

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Post by 3DZONE on Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:42 am

Nice rendering kawan...pls indicate your workflow (software)...welcome to CGP

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Post by kurdaps! on Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:42 am

Please complete a 5 posts below first.

http://www.cgpinoy.org/f15-first-5-post-practice-3d-wip

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Post by MrHarimani on Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:46 am

yeah right..maybe the ramp is too steep....oke...thx for critixs

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Post by MrHarimani on Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:49 am

i am sorry....i am just new here...okay i will read the rules first....

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Post by torvicz on Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:56 am

That ramp reminds me of a resort where they have this pool with a slide, we used to go there during summer.... hehe

Just teasing, welcome dude! Very Happy
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Post by bokkins on Thu Apr 21, 2011 3:25 am

Your ramp is very dangerous!

Welcome to CGP. Your render is very good. But you have to do something with the design. Good luck!
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Post by MrHarimani on Thu Apr 21, 2011 4:08 am

ok thanks for the input...sorry if design is not good...i will improve it....

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Post by kurdaps! on Thu Apr 21, 2011 4:14 am

MrHarimani wrote:ok thanks for the input...sorry if design is not good...i will improve it....


You know what, there is no problem in the design except for that ramp. The idea why you raised that ramp is to reach the lobby which is on the second level and the first level is a parking I assume. Why not make a
basement? Make that as the parking OR you can keep it as it is just makethe lobby PLUS the parking on the first level. So hilarious seeing that ramp, imagine this is a hospital.


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Post by Neil Joshua Rosario on Thu Apr 21, 2011 8:02 am

wow nice render but the ramp explode your design. find designers hand book the black one it will cost you 250 pesos. you can find the proportion and the standards in building
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Post by whey09 on Thu Apr 21, 2011 8:06 am

Neil Joshua Rosario wrote:wow nice render but the ramp explode your design. find designers hand book the black one it will cost you 250 pesos. you can find the proportion and the standards in building

He lives in Malaysia,
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Post by MrHarimani on Thu Apr 21, 2011 8:05 pm

oke thanks everyone.....i will fix it...i really dont realize the ramp is my bad in this design.....sorry again bad english......anyway happy easter.....

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Post by aesonck on Thu Apr 21, 2011 8:55 pm

Welcome to Cgpinoy

Nice Render, try to study ramp slopes.
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Post by zromel on Thu Apr 21, 2011 10:45 pm

we will wait for the update sir. Very Happy for sure its nice
- just add shadow to the people in the scene
thanks for sharing keep posting...
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Post by scorpion21 on Fri Apr 22, 2011 4:27 pm

Hi Harinmani...welcome to CGP...Your rendering is good!...but with that limited space/area for sure you cant attain a descent ramp slope...do you mind sharing the design brief?...TA
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Post by MrHarimani on Fri Apr 22, 2011 11:17 pm

i am sorry...i dont understand ....design brief???sorry my english is not very good....
already revised the ramp...input from buddy here....also another view and adjust color a little grey....please comment and critic....thanks...







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Post by bokkins on Sat Apr 23, 2011 12:05 am

This ramp is way better, still steep but better than the first one. You know what you can do here? Move the start and end of the ramp to the edges of your lot, that way, you will have enough room for the slope to be less steep.
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Post by MrHarimani on Sat Apr 23, 2011 4:27 am

thanks sir....but this revision already been approved by owner...so i dont think i will fix it again...ahahaha..thx...

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Post by RQUI on Sun Apr 24, 2011 5:49 am

nice design sir.. keep sharing.. thumbsup
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Post by ortzak on Sun Apr 24, 2011 10:08 am

ramp or driveway too steep..dangerous...nice render btw!!
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Post by MrHarimani on Sun Apr 24, 2011 11:31 pm

oke thks for the input...the ramp is still a problem..cause the lot i have is too little...here is final revision and glass material reflection seting...i think this final revision is little uglier than the first one..but the owner insist this one better....please comment.....










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Post by micoliver1226 on Sun Apr 24, 2011 11:43 pm

for me..the first one is more better but still need to work-out a little bit with your ramp(refer to IBC requirements.if applicable to your area) otherwise, isn't accessible..
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