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Post by shipwreck on Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:52 pm

A Female Character Study. Modelled in Maya. Texture and normal maps in photoshop and zbrush. Pinag iisipan ko pa if I'll Rig it or not, but sana magustuhan nyo guys.








with my Creature model Smile Link





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Re: Female Character

Post by lance on Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:58 pm

nice nmn gusto ko nito rig nlng

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Re: Female Character

Post by Norman on Mon Jul 11, 2011 9:26 pm

comments ko.
- ang kinis ng balat pero mukha na syang 60yrs old. mas okey kung magandang babae yung nilagay mo.
- yung proportion ng boobs or armor masyadong massive.
- proportion ng legs mukhang mahaba and gawin mo na rin metal yung pants instead ng black cloth lang since nag start ka ng metal chest plate. or cloth both pants and upper body.

design wise kailangan pang e develop, modelling and texturing wise ok na ok.

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Re: Female Character

Post by shipwreck on Tue Jul 12, 2011 7:48 pm

f-41 wrote:comments ko.
- ang kinis ng balat pero mukha na syang 60yrs old. mas okey kung magandang babae yung nilagay mo.
- yung proportion ng boobs or armor masyadong massive.
- proportion ng legs mukhang mahaba and gawin mo na rin metal yung pants instead ng black cloth lang since nag start ka ng metal chest plate. or cloth both pants and upper body.

design wise kailangan pang e develop, modelling and texturing wise ok na ok.

I agree with you sir. My model still needs more development since andami pang errors design-wise as well as the proportion. And thankyou for your comments sir. It gives us (those who were new to character modelling and dev't) a chance to improve our skills as well as to know which part of our skillset needs improvement. thumbsup

Anyway, here is an attempt to decrease her age. Very Happy




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Re: Female Character

Post by d_thumb on Wed Jul 13, 2011 12:26 pm

Sintel Part 2? Smile
Ayaw mo talaga liitan yung dibdib? lol
Para bumata pa, dagdagan mo nang kaunti pang pisnge.

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Re: Female Character

Post by bokkins on Wed Jul 13, 2011 12:46 pm

Dagdagan mo ng check bone. itaas mo ng konti ang lips. tapos iakyat mo ang dulo ng ilong. liitan mo din ang boobs, gawin mong medyo pointed. good luck!

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Re: Female Character

Post by shipwreck on Sun Jul 17, 2011 10:47 pm

thanks guys! Here is another attempt .. Smile




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Re: Female Character

Post by d_thumb on Mon Jul 18, 2011 12:43 am

Bigyan kita nang paintover...



Tip: huwag mo muna i-render with shadows o kaya i-printscreen mo muna sa viewport, mahirap kasi makita yung mukha.
Judging form the shape of the body (mahaba na katawan), ang habol mo ay stylized na character? Ayoko masyado baguhin yung ulo, may sarili kang style e, adjust mo nalang yung shape nang ulo sa sideview. Maliit kasi yung jaw niya tapos may underbite... parang matanda na siya. Pati din yung tenga i-usog at scale mo nang kaunti.

P.S. Opinion lang, laparan mo din nang kaunti yung bridge ng nose masyadong narrow.
And study your anatomy often.

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Re: Female Character

Post by shipwreck on Mon Jul 18, 2011 5:17 am

@ d_thumb- thakyou for your inputs sir. thumbsup . Well i really wanted to make this character tall. yung nga lang mukhang masyadong na-exagerate ata yung haba ng legs nya . hehe.

Yes you're right sir. madami pa ko need na improve when it comes to anatomy. I really want to master character development specially sa human anatomy, kasi for me, yun yung talagang napaka-challenging pagdating sa modelling. Yung pagmomodel di lang ng mga human characters pati mga creatures and other organic stuff, not just hard surface models. Smile Hopefully sana mahasa din ang skills ko tulad ng ibang mga masters dito sa cgpinoy.

As requested sir ito po ung screenmshot sa viewport as well as yung wireframe. Mejo heavy nga lang sya sa polycount. hehe.

Thankyou ulit sir. hippie


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Re: Female Character

Post by d_thumb on Mon Jul 18, 2011 8:18 am

Kulelat ako sa har surface, hehe. Hanapin mo ito sa net "Figure Drawing" by Andrew Loomis.
Malaking tulong to. Wink

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Re: Female Character

Post by marktayag on Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:36 am

metallic bra. nice! keep it up

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Re: Female Character

Post by nullbreak15 on Wed Nov 23, 2011 1:55 am

sir yung hair nya mas maganda i bagay mo sa facial nya.. nice one

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