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Post by parusa on Tue Jul 12, 2011 2:19 am

good day to all. just want to share my latest output. this would be my first post, hope you like it. C&C's are very much appreciated. thank you in advance!..
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BTW newbie lang po mga master sana makapagadvice kayo para maimprove ko pa.salamat!

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Post by harimani on Tue Jul 12, 2011 9:53 am

seems to me your cars and bike is too big....compare to the door at the wall....nice render

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Post by Neil Joshua Rosario on Tue Jul 12, 2011 8:00 pm

nice render keep practicing lang bro
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Post by qcksilver on Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:27 pm

looks good, medyo malakas lang intensity ng light para sa akin, yung trees na nagreflect sa 2nd floor windows parang mataas na masyado and konting tweak pa ng window glass material, yung mga tao walang shadows


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Post by cooletz on Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:28 pm

nice render sir.. 2thumbsup 3d din po ba yung tao?
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Post by xtianatix on Tue Jul 12, 2011 11:34 pm


halaman po ba yung nakaharang sa gate sir? baka masagasaan ng kotse. hehe.
nice design and render.
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Post by parusa on Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:00 pm

seems to me your cars and bike is too big....compare to the door at the wall....nice render

it seems your right sir..i just rescaled these models simultaneously. i should be more careful in proportioning and scaling. anyway, thanks a lot sir!..more power to you.

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Post by parusa on Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:32 pm

nice render keep practicing lang bro

sure bro, sana magkaroon pa ng madaming oras para makapagpractice pa. salamat sa pagdaan sir.

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Post by parusa on Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:42 pm

looks good, medyo malakas lang intensity ng light para sa akin, yung trees na nagreflect sa 2nd floor windows parang mataas na masyado and konting tweak pa ng window glass material, yung mga tao walang shadows

very well said sir, yan din napansin ko sa reflection bago ako mgpost process. maraming salamat s pagpoint out. sa shadows naman honestly hindi ko napansin. ewan ko kung bakit. may mali yata sa config ng GI.?

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Post by parusa on Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:51 pm

nice render sir.. 3d din po ba yung tao

oo bro 3d. downloadable yan. salamat s pagdaan




halaman po ba yung nakaharang sa gate sir? baka masagasaan ng kotse. hehe.
nice design and render.


oo bro. Very Happy di lang naitabi ni inday ng maayos.. thumbsup salamat sir!

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Post by aesonck on Mon Jul 18, 2011 11:03 pm


Where is the unity of the townhouse?, rather put the arch shape on the right side above the cantiliver exposed small white box, which can eliminate the subtractive part of the Main Solid.

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Post by ARNEL_PRO on Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:42 am

I like the design sir lalo na yong left building ganda ganda. comment sa glass nung next building some part too reflective some wala na tsaka yong girl sa right parang rumarampa better change or remove nalang nasa harap pa naman. overall ganda and design is great.. thanks for sharing
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