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Post by oby20 on Mon Aug 08, 2011 2:41 am

2nd post pinarender lang ito, salamat mga sir! Very Happy
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Re: Vacation House

Post by dedspecdam on Mon Aug 08, 2011 9:52 am

sir oby, newbie rin po, comment ko lang medyo madilim lang scene, composition ok sir
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Post by oby20 on Mon Aug 08, 2011 11:44 am

dedspecdam wrote:sir oby, newbie rin po, comment ko lang medyo madilim lang scene, composition ok sir

salamat sir deds, take note ko yan sir..
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Re: Vacation House

Post by Norman on Mon Aug 08, 2011 12:07 pm

much better kung dun sa nasisinagan ng araw mo kinuha yung angle or yung araw lagay mo sa view mo.

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600 views? wala pang nagko-comment?


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Re: Vacation House

Post by vilpang on Mon Aug 08, 2011 1:03 pm

agree ako kay sir f-41 sir oby, o kaya try mong itaas ng konti yong posisyon ng sun mo(imho)...

nice render by the way ...
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Post by xtianatix on Mon Aug 08, 2011 8:10 pm

nice vegetation. thumbsup
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Post by deosrock on Tue Aug 09, 2011 12:27 am

-nice work, post more camera angle sir!!!
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Re: Vacation House

Post by broodwar1126 on Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:46 am

napansin ko lang bossing yung mga roof tiles ay medyo po yata malalaki.
saka po yung mga cocout trees sa may left side ay sobra po yata mataas.
yung lang sir sa akin...all-in-all nice practice po. Very Happy
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Re: Vacation House

Post by oby20 on Wed Aug 10, 2011 2:33 am

f-41 wrote:much better kung dun sa nasisinagan ng araw mo kinuha yung angle or yung araw lagay mo sa view mo.

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600 views? wala pang nagko-comment?
my point kayo sir, pero mas maganda tignan kung my contrast ang 2 side ng walls kesa s parehong maliwanag.
mejo napadilim nga lang masyado, salamat sir.

vilpang wrote:agree ako kay sir f-41 sir oby, o kaya try mong itaas ng konti yong posisyon ng sun mo(imho)...
nice render by the way ...
mejo napadilim nga sir siguro konti liwanag pa nga, salamat sir.

xtianatix wrote:nice vegetation.
hehe salamat sir, dinaan ko na lang s landscaping kase simple lang design ni senior architect na nagpagawa saken.

deosrock wrote:-nice work, post more camera angle sir!!!
salamat sir, humingi ang nagpagawa saken ng spot ng entance, gagawan ko ng spot view sa entrance post ko na lng ulit sir.

broodwar1126 wrote:napansin ko lang bossing yung mga roof tiles ay medyo po yata malalaki.
saka po yung mga cocout trees sa may left side ay sobra po yata mataas.
yung lang sir sa akin...all-in-all nice practice po. Very Happy
salamat sir mejo malapit ang coconut pero same height lang mga yan wala akong binago, pero cge sir icheck ko scale..
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Re: Vacation House

Post by ARIST on Wed Aug 10, 2011 2:59 am

Im not sure sa scale ng mga coconut trees, kindly check, merong napasobra ata sa liit at laki. Taas mo konti yung camera, make it man's eye view, usually nasa 1.4m -1.6m. Maski tanggalin mo na lang yung babae dun, para kasing nakadikit sa wall. Keep on posting! Very Happy
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Re: Vacation House

Post by oby20 on Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:41 am

salamat sa lahat ng nag post mga sir!
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Re: Vacation House

Post by qcksilver on Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:43 am

- medyo magulo tignan ang mga halaman sa foreground kalat-kalat kasi sir, try nyo po grouping
- same sa ibang plants medyo napalaki din
- ung kotse mahaba yata?
- madilim nga po hindi na makita yung ceiling
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