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Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by mstyle028 on Mon Aug 15, 2011 11:56 am

Whew, matapos ang mahigit isang linggong pagprapraktis at malayo pa rin sa gusto kong maachieve. Nainspired ako sa isang Digital Artist, sobrang realistic ang mga renderings nya, his name is Jacques Defontaine (www.tkio.net).

Modeled and Rendered in Modo. Need ko lang po ng opinion nyo kung saan may hindi magandang part. Thanks..



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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by qcksilver on Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:39 am

kamukha ni Benjie Paras ehe, galing sir wala akong alam sa Modo pero para sa akin magaling, manipis ata kilay ehe

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by ymhon on Tue Aug 16, 2011 7:10 am

nice modo user. oo nga kamukha ni benjie paras. Very Happy

- eyebrows nga sir. kapalan mo pa.
- para sakin parang medyo maliit yung proportion ng skull niya. pero baka sa angle and camera lang.

keep practicing po. you'll get what you want. Smile goodluck

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by khamrender on Tue Aug 16, 2011 7:18 am

astig

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by vilpang on Tue Aug 16, 2011 7:45 am

nice practice sir

put eye lashes..

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by valencha08 on Tue Aug 16, 2011 9:05 am

nice sir parang kapitbahay ko lang hahaha

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by mstyle028 on Tue Aug 16, 2011 11:33 pm

Hi, thanks po sa pagreply, actually sobrang malayo pa sya sa gusto ko maachieve, pero ang main goal ko talaga is realistic skin shading, sa fur medyo hindi ko pa nagagamit,.

here is another render :


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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by ymhon on Wed Aug 17, 2011 12:21 am

nice sir nag-improve yung head especially sa eyes niya. Smile
parang kulang parin yung kilay... bitin parin sa panlasa ko.hehehe

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by mstyle028 on Wed Aug 17, 2011 12:45 am

ymhon wrote:nice sir nag-improve yung head especially sa eyes niya. Smile
parang kulang parin yung kilay... bitin parin sa panlasa ko.hehehe

yes sir, balak ko nga ulit sya sculpt/texture sa zbrush, para ayusin ung details. pero as of now, medyo nakukuha ko na rin ang workflow hehe,, salamat po sa reply

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by mstyle028 on Wed Aug 17, 2011 4:01 am

adjusting some settings,

here's the new render


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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by aesonck on Wed Aug 17, 2011 4:29 am

Nice bro, chris daughtry??,

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by vilpang on Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:11 am

nice update sir!!

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by effreymm on Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:15 am

Nice sir realistic yong skin.

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by mstyle028 on Wed Aug 17, 2011 10:10 pm

hi sir, thanks po sa pag drop by and comments. medyo kulang pa talaga sya sa pagiging realistic hehe,, ito talaga goal ko ngayon ang maachieve rendering gaya neto,



MADE BY: JACQUES DEFONTAINE. (MODO, ZBRUSH, PHOTOSHOP) << IDOL KO YAN H

i guess it takes time talaga para maabot to. pero as of now masaya narin ako sa output. Anyways, im planning to render a new head, mas detail ang sculpting at mas accurate ang skin, try ko lang hehe.. Thanks

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by marktayag on Wed Aug 17, 2011 11:44 pm

tyaga lang ma aachive mo rin yan

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by mstyle028 on Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:16 am

hehe.. Oo nga sir, tyaga lang talaga, kahit papaano may improvements naman. need lang talaga ng mga critics Smile))

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by marktayag on Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:23 am

tama!. kung critics. i think lagyan mo ng eye lash saka eye lid ungmata ng model mo. that will add up sa realisim. then consider adding wrinkles by using zbrush. and finally add some hair. lets see how it will turn out

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by mstyle028 on Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:33 am

marktayag wrote:tama!. kung critics. i think lagyan mo ng eye lash saka eye lid ungmata ng model mo. that will add up sa realisim. then consider adding wrinkles by using zbrush. and finally add some hair. lets see how it will turn out

ay sir baka hindi mo nakita ung final render ko sa pinakababa hehe. may eyelash na kasi un eh

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by marktayag on Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:59 am

ay oo nga no meron nga. di ko masyado na pansin. but i think wrinkles nga between the brows will help.

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by mstyle028 on Fri Aug 19, 2011 8:29 am

marktayag wrote:ay oo nga no meron nga. di ko masyado na pansin. but i think wrinkles nga between the brows will help.
, yeap im planning to render a new head, oldy guy siguro para mapractice ang sculpting lalo, hehehe.

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by M_Shadows on Fri Aug 19, 2011 1:36 pm

sir, ito pala ang modo - napakahusay bro! kahit medyo malayo sa aim mo.

here are some of the differences that you might want to alter
or take note of for next practice to capture such emotion...

Eyes as we all know plays a big part
- study the iris - if you want to achieve a sad look like that, . dont dilate the eyes...
liitan mo yung pupil or black portion/center ng eyes... [scientific yun hehehe]
- naka-receed ang mga mata ng sa goal mo. almost half-closed ang eyelids nya - sneering.
sayo medyo parang nakakita ng chick - na-excit and then natulala - kita buong iris. hehe
- add bulges sa eyesocket or eyelids + eyebags - lubog yung mata ng sayo.
tho medyo maitim din, mukhang nakakatulog siya ng walong oras gabi gabi.
- ang eyelashes dalawa dapat diba, isang set sa taas, isang set sa baba...
habaan mo pa ang eyelashes sa baba kung meron man. parang wala kasi.
- make that flesh [where the root of the eyelahses] and tearduct pinkish.
parang maluhaluha na kasi yung sa goal mo... sayo whitish - patay ang veins.

Downward Creases - halos zero yung sayo - nakapagbotox. you missed the ff:
- sa forehead
- between the eyebrow
- crow's feet sa eyes
- smile line
- sa chin [define mo pa ung parang arc]
- cleft chin

Nose - pang bb. pilippinas ang ilong ng sayo. perfectly defined for a man.
ung sa goal mo, rounder ang tip rather than pointed or as sharp.
and yung pinakaleaf ng nose parang dapat "maga" dun sa part na yun
so, that makes it look as if mas malaki yung butas ng ilong ng sayo...

Lips - you also got thicker lips - manipis yung sa goal mo.

Ears - mukhang plastic - masyado makinis...
habaan mo din yung lobule - pinagsasabitan n bling-bling

*skin - panalo na yan sir! hehe

good luck! and like to see more of these! Basketball

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by mstyle028 on Sat Aug 20, 2011 2:52 am

@M_Shadows, thanks for pointing out hehe,,

bali po yung head is free mesh nalang sya ng modo, pinaglaruan ko lang sya. I mean hindi ko po goal gayahin ung itsura ng pnakita kong picture, ang goal ko is maging realistic gaya nung pinost ko (skinshade, hair, eyebrow, lighting, eyes, wrinkles etc.)

kulang talaga sya sa wrinkles, kaya practice ako ngayon sa zbrush hehe, medyo nakuha ko na din kasi workflow kaya medyo wala ng problem,

Salamat po sir sa pagdrop by hehe!.

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by reyknow on Thu Aug 25, 2011 6:47 am

nice work, improving yung render ah Very Happy



sa model crit ko lang yung detail. try mo isipin pag minomodel yung mukha yung shape nung skull under ng skin, para di maging "blobby" yung final output. tska ganda ng reference mo ah!

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Re: Head Rendering (Practice only)

Post by mstyle028 on Thu Aug 25, 2011 10:11 am

reyknow wrote:nice work, improving yung render ah Very Happy



sa model crit ko lang yung detail. try mo isipin pag minomodel yung mukha yung shape nung skull under ng skin, para di maging "blobby" yung final output. tska ganda ng reference mo ah!

Thanks po hehe,

onga po eh, practice pa sa texturing, actually wala akong main reference dyan, kung ano ano lang pinagkukuha kong pictures(hi-res) then paint sa zbrush, naging inspiration ko lang yung gumawa nyan, ang galing kasi eh, sobrang realistic, and sa Modo nya ni render. You can visit his website >> www.tkio.net

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