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Post by draftermag$ on Sun Aug 21, 2011 7:58 am

model and render lang po ang sa akin...
c&c's are always welcome for my improvement





salamat ng marami pala to all vfsu guru here and to all cgpeps...
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Post by charlie on Sun Aug 21, 2011 8:34 am

maganda sir.. nice roofing,,
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Post by vilpang on Sun Aug 21, 2011 8:48 am

ayos nice first post sir..

design and render ok ..

-camera vertical shift lang sir, kasi medyo tumba yong house..

-kaunting dislacement sa grass..

keep it up sir draftermags...Smile
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Post by RQUI on Sun Aug 21, 2011 9:24 am

the image is saturated sir..
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Post by modelrenz_2011 on Sun Aug 21, 2011 12:57 pm

for me good start sir
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Post by vhychenq on Mon Aug 22, 2011 1:44 am

Welcome to CGP,
image is kinda sharp,lalo na yung shadows. I agree with sir Rqui,kinda saturated din lalo na sa vegetations.
*try increasing the size of the sun and its shadow subdivision para maging smooth dating ng shadows mo
*edit mo din yung diffuse color ng trees,darken mo para di magmukhang saturated.
tambay lang dito bro,keep posting.

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Post by draftermag$ on Mon Aug 22, 2011 7:52 am

charlie wrote:maganda sir.. nice roofing,,
maraming salamat po sir... Very Happy
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Post by draftermag$ on Mon Aug 22, 2011 7:59 am

vilpang wrote:ayos nice first post sir..

design and render ok ..

-camera vertical shift lang sir, kasi medyo tumba yong house..

-kaunting dislacement sa grass..

keep it up sir draftermags...Smile
okey sir, pagpractizan ko po yan sir...
salamat sa pagdaan sir...
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Post by draftermag$ on Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:06 am

RQUI wrote:the image is saturated sir..
hirap kasi sa photoshop sir, next time po sir RQUI kunting adjustment nalang...
thank you po sir...
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Post by draftermag$ on Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:07 am

modelrenz_2011 wrote:for me good start sir
thank you sir... Very Happy
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Post by draftermag$ on Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:15 am

vhychenq wrote:Welcome to CGP,
image is kinda sharp,lalo na yung shadows. I agree with sir Rqui,kinda saturated din lalo na sa vegetations.
*try increasing the size of the sun and its shadow subdivision para maging smooth dating ng shadows mo
*edit mo din yung diffuse color ng trees,darken mo para di magmukhang saturated.
tambay lang dito bro,keep posting.
thank you sir vhychenq...
napasobrahan nga po sir, okey po sir noted po yan lahat,
lage nga akong nakatambay dito sir, hahanap ng mga tutz... Very Happy
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Post by ar_monzter on Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:46 am

magandang simulain bro. nice roofing. saturated nga. sundin naten advice ng mga masters. thumbsup
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Post by aesonck on Mon Aug 22, 2011 11:22 pm

Hi bro ..some c/c's....

I'm wondering for the entrance bro...if im drunk..I would really miss the main door... Very Happy " tog! ", then sa trellace grabee ang mixing nito ..orange, brown, pink.

For the environment bro, its deceptive.kung saan lugar., see this for the front view..,compare it with the main env..

http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif

or thinking of something else ....co'z of the firehose sa road... Smile,
and the other half baka sa kabilang bahay. pale .. Question hippie / sunny = -

"Ceiling" , plywood ba? or gypsum...
"Roof", panu bato gawin ? na mas maga-an, parang di pwidi sa comp ko to..nice model! thumbsup , like the color 2thumbsup

.................... Arrow Very Happy







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