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Post by pHidz on Fri Sep 09, 2011 1:54 am

good day po sa lahat.. pa post naman po ako..
this is my first render in 3dmax, CC's are very much welcome and appreciated..
i used cadd2010+3dsmax (mental ray)

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Post by Neil Joshua Rosario on Fri Sep 09, 2011 1:56 am

not bad for fist timer
-work on backgrounds need more foilage
-dark gutter
-dark shadows
-over all nice render
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Post by pHidz on Fri Sep 09, 2011 1:58 am

Neil Joshua Rosario wrote:not bad for fist timer
-work on backgrounds need more foilage
-dark gutter
-dark shadows
-over all nice render
welcome to cgp


thanks sir.. Very Happy
-foilages got cramped ng konti po,
mejo nahirapan kasi comp to render,
ill improve it next time...


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Post by Neil Joshua Rosario on Fri Sep 09, 2011 2:00 am

try to use vray

you can contact me on my FB account ul_uapsa@yahoo.com
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Re: 3d - newbie two-storey residential

Post by trox on Fri Sep 09, 2011 3:34 am

Nice design maam

- try to set 5 - 10 of the sun size
- on the environment tab use HDRI
- for me its ok for presentation
- you can adjust the shadows and highlights on photoshop..

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Re: 3d - newbie two-storey residential

Post by oby20 on Fri Sep 09, 2011 4:06 am

-camera correction
-medyo layuan mo pa ang view to show more foreground.
-more trees sa likod mam para mas maganda sa background.

nice design mam, tambay ka lang dto maiimprove ka lalo
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Re: 3d - newbie two-storey residential

Post by pHidz on Sun Sep 11, 2011 10:07 pm

trox wrote:Nice design maam

- try to set 5 - 10 of the sun size
- on the environment tab use HDRI
- for me its ok for presentation
- you can adjust the shadows and highlights on photoshop..

Cheers


thanks you sir trox..
ill keep those in mind next time.. thumbsup
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Post by pHidz on Sun Sep 11, 2011 10:08 pm

oby20 wrote:-camera correction
-medyo layuan mo pa ang view to show more foreground.
-more trees sa likod mam para mas maganda sa background.

nice design mam, tambay ka lang dto maiimprove ka lalo


thanks sir oby20
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Post by modelrenz_2011 on Mon Sep 12, 2011 1:00 am

nice ma'am comment nasabi na good for first render
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