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Post by arki_ray on Sun Sep 11, 2011 4:20 am

Good day mga masters! please check my first work, bahay po yan ng kapit bahay namin. uumpisahan palang po this coming october. C&C are always welcome!

WF: 3dMax09, Cad,Ps

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Re: my first exterior rendering (simple bungalow)

Post by jade516 on Sun Sep 11, 2011 5:00 am

Nice one!
-sa material,repetition po yung UVmap ninyo.
-mas dark yung background trees niyo po, mas nakakaagaw attention pa kesa structure, IMHO.
-edit nyo nalang po edges trees nyo sa PS,may mga white edges na undeleted pa po

Tfs! Keep on posting. Marami pa tayong matutunan dito!
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Re: my first exterior rendering (simple bungalow)

Post by reybits on Sun Sep 11, 2011 5:03 am

Agree po ako kay Sir Jade516, practice lang po ng practice mam. kep it up TFS , Nice Try
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Re: my first exterior rendering (simple bungalow)

Post by RQUI on Sun Sep 11, 2011 6:09 am

Nice design.. Keep practicing.. thumbsup
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Re: my first exterior rendering (simple bungalow)

Post by vhychenq on Sun Sep 11, 2011 7:44 am

*Na-Crop po yung image ng konti.
*parang front elevation lang, practice on finding good cam angles and also take note on the "rule of thirds".
*increase shadow subdivision.
practice lang po

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Re: my first exterior rendering (simple bungalow)

Post by Neil Joshua Rosario on Sun Sep 11, 2011 8:34 am

welcome to cgp
keep practicing sundin mo nalang mga sinabi nila.
agree ako kay master chen.

tambay ka lang dito
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Re: my first exterior rendering (simple bungalow)

Post by khadary on Sun Sep 11, 2011 8:46 am

niceeeee
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Re: my first exterior rendering (simple bungalow)

Post by pipzguitarz on Sun Sep 11, 2011 7:40 pm

Wow! Cute naman ng ginawa mo. The design is there. Just keep practicing. Tambay ka lang dito sa CGPinoy, marami kang matututunan.
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Re: my first exterior rendering (simple bungalow)

Post by arki_ray on Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:16 am

jade516 wrote:Nice one!
-sa material,repetition po yung UVmap ninyo.
-mas dark yung background trees niyo po, mas nakakaagaw attention pa kesa structure, IMHO.
-edit nyo nalang po edges trees nyo sa PS,may mga white edges na undeleted pa po

Tfs! Keep on posting. Marami pa tayong matutunan dito!



:maraming salamat po sa pagdaan at sa mga advices nyo sir jade516.. copied po.. wag po sana kayo magsasawa ha Smile
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Post by arki_ray on Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:23 am

reybits wrote:Agree po ako kay Sir Jade516, practice lang po ng practice mam. kep it up TFS , Nice Try


maraming salamat po.. pagbubutihin ko nalang po next time. beginner lang po kc Smile
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Post by arki_ray on Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:25 am

RQUI wrote:Nice design.. Keep practicing.. thumbsup

thak you po Smile
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Re: my first exterior rendering (simple bungalow)

Post by arki_ray on Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:27 am

vhychenq wrote:*Na-Crop po yung image ng konti.
*parang front elevation lang, practice on finding good cam angles and also take note on the "rule of thirds".
*increase shadow subdivision.
practice lang po


yan po kasi gusto ng owner na anlge.. may prob nga po ako sa lighting ko eh.. maraming salamat po! Wink
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Post by arki_ray on Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:28 am

Neil Joshua Rosario wrote:welcome to cgp
keep practicing sundin mo nalang mga sinabi nila.
agree ako kay master chen.

tambay ka lang dito


thank you po sir neil! Smile
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Post by arki_ray on Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:29 am

khadary wrote:niceeeee

thank you po Smile
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Post by arki_ray on Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:30 am

pipzguitarz wrote:Wow! Cute naman ng ginawa mo. The design is there. Just keep practicing. Tambay ka lang dito sa CGPinoy, marami kang matututunan.

malaking tulong po talaga ang site na ito.. maraming salamat po sa pagdaan Smile
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Re: my first exterior rendering (simple bungalow)

Post by 3STAN on Mon Sep 12, 2011 6:49 am

hindi nag be blend yung foliage sa scene halata pa pag ka ps try to maximize use ng max mo, marami tutorials dito check mo sila..Keep practicing!I Hope my honest comment will help you.
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Re: my first exterior rendering (simple bungalow)

Post by erika on Mon Sep 12, 2011 9:10 am

nice one po,just keep practicing.. Very Happy
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Post by modelrenz_2011 on Mon Sep 12, 2011 3:13 pm

nice design
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Post by vilpang on Mon Sep 12, 2011 8:52 pm

nice design ma'am...

keep practicing, lalong gaganda pa yan ...

keep posting...
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Re: my first exterior rendering (simple bungalow)

Post by oby20 on Tue Sep 13, 2011 5:25 am

tone down mo lang ang background mam, lighter lang ang sky, and delete edges ng cutout trees,
nice first post
keep on practicing
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Re: my first exterior rendering (simple bungalow)

Post by care_lord on Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:43 am

ayos ang design. vray po ba gamit ninyo mam? babaan mo yung min sub. like 2 or 1 tapos yung max sub. gawin mong 4 or 5. sabi. tambay lang dito...
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Re: my first exterior rendering (simple bungalow)

Post by archshade02 on Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:50 am

meron din pong mga tutorials paano linisin ang mga inilalagay mong mga trees tambay lang po kayo dito for sure marami kayong matutunan
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