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Post by Guest on Thu Sep 29, 2011 6:15 am

hello po,bago lang po ako dito..maganda pala dito daming matutunan.and here is my render last month and the present, i need a lot of suggestions po sa gawa ko para maimproved naman.salamat...
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Post by phranq on Thu Sep 29, 2011 6:34 am

wrong section. please read our forum rules.

anyway,
nice designs, comments lang sir,
*study more on lighting, materials and compositions.
*bawasan mo muna ang mga elements para hindi magulo tignan ang images.
*proper image framing and proportions.
*other images are saturated.

kaunting practice pa sir at maraming dalaw sa forum.
goodluck!
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Post by Guest on Thu Sep 29, 2011 6:39 am

@phranq>>wrong section po ako sir?sorry po.,.salamat sa suggestion sir..,okay ill work hard on that para maimprove po ang work ko.

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Post by kurdaps! on Thu Sep 29, 2011 6:46 am

lostinsight wrote:@phranq>>wrong section po ako sir?sorry po.,.salamat sa suggestion sir..,okay ill work hard on that para maimprove po ang work ko.

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Post by Neil Joshua Rosario on Thu Sep 29, 2011 7:30 am

design is nice. practice in applying texture. keep it up tambay ka lang dito. tama si sir phranq
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Post by Agda on Thu Sep 29, 2011 3:59 pm

Agree din ako sa mga comment ni sir pharnq....Sundin mo lang yun mgiimprove pa output mo sir .... Keep it up sir.....
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Post by Guest on Fri Sep 30, 2011 7:53 am

Neil Joshua Rosario wrote:design is nice. practice in applying texture. keep it up tambay ka lang dito. tama si sir phranq

>>salamat sir..gagawin ko po yan sa vray..

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Post by Guest on Fri Sep 30, 2011 7:55 am

Agda wrote:Agree din ako sa mga comment ni sir pharnq....Sundin mo lang yun mgiimprove pa output mo sir .... Keep it up sir.....

@Agda>>salamat sir.,.godbless..

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Post by ArchFEWs2 on Fri Sep 30, 2011 2:00 pm

Kerky din gamit mo sir. nice, may bagong release sir, Kerkythea Boost. mas bumilis lang yung rendering time compare sa 2008.

Nice work, yung texture lang, medyo magulo yung dating.
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Post by oby20 on Fri Sep 30, 2011 2:14 pm

nice design
make your composition simple, dont put many things that will distract your building, okay lang maglagay ng ibang elements pero dapat pag tinignan ang image mo unang tingin pa lang dapat ang unang mapapansin ay ang building mo, hindi ang kotse, hindi ang puno or kung ano, that is good composition, pag aralan mo pano lulutang ang building mo over the background that you have, kase right now naglalaban sila sa image.
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Post by Guest on Sat Oct 01, 2011 12:15 am

ArchFEWs2 wrote:Kerky din gamit mo sir. nice, may bagong release sir, Kerkythea Boost. mas bumilis lang yung rendering time compare sa 2008.

Nice work, yung texture lang, medyo magulo yung dating.

>>yes sir,,lahat po yan ay kerky..ahh may bago pala,.heheh,,napag iwanan na talaga ako.,.,salamat sa info sir and speed talaga ang kilangan dito.,.thanks again sir ArchFEWs2.. thumbsup

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Post by Guest on Sat Oct 01, 2011 12:20 am

oby20 wrote:nice design
make your composition simple, dont put many things that will distract your building, okay lang maglagay ng ibang elements pero dapat pag tinignan ang image mo unang tingin pa lang dapat ang unang mapapansin ay ang building mo, hindi ang kotse, hindi ang puno or kung ano, that is good composition, pag aralan mo pano lulutang ang building mo over the background that you have, kase right now naglalaban sila sa image.

>>salamat sir oby20..,ngayon ko lang na realize ang mga sinabi nioy mga masters..ang gulo pala talaga nang ginawa ko,,daming distraction..btw salamat po,,nextime ill try na hindi na umagaw pansin ang hindi kasali.,salamat again sir oby20.. thumbsup

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Post by modelrenz_2011 on Sat Oct 01, 2011 12:23 am

nice sir
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Post by Guest on Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:20 am

modelrenz_2011 wrote:nice sir
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>>salamat sir modelrenz_2011.,., thumbsup

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Post by bokkins on Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:42 am

Too much tiling but almost there.
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Post by Guest on Sat Oct 01, 2011 2:15 am

bokkins wrote:Too much tiling but almost there.

>> Smile ganun po ba sir bokkins,.salamat po sir,,. Very Happy

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Post by bing1370 on Sat Oct 01, 2011 3:54 am

nice design, you can learn more from here, tambay ka lang..
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Post by Guest on Sat Oct 01, 2011 7:59 am

bing1370 wrote:nice design, you can learn more from here, tambay ka lang..

>>>salamat sir bing..daming magagaling dito..mga mind blowing talaga ang render nila..na inspire ako sainyo sir.,.salamat again.. thumbsup

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Post by oRangE.n.GreeN on Sat Oct 01, 2011 7:11 pm

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yung last image mo, halos nandun ka na. ang galing!

masyadong mataas ang bump ng wood.

agaw pansin lang ang mga sasakyan mo. ilalagay mo lang yan kapag gusto mong i-divert ang atensyon ng kliyente mo dahil hindi masyadong impressive ang presentation mo o hindi ka masaya sa design na ginawa mo.

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Post by Guest on Sun Oct 02, 2011 5:33 am

oRangE.n.GreeN wrote:.


yung last image mo, halos nandun ka na. ang galing!

masyadong mataas ang bump ng wood.

agaw pansin lang ang mga sasakyan mo. ilalagay mo lang yan kapag gusto mong i-divert ang atensyon ng kliyente mo dahil hindi masyadong impressive ang presentation mo o hindi ka masaya sa design na ginawa mo.

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>>ahh ganun po ba sir,,my idea na ako kung kilan ko ilalagay ang mga diversion..salamat po sir.,.oo nga sir masyadong mataas.,.,heheh..salamat sir,. thumbsup thumbsup

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Post by vilpang on Sun Oct 02, 2011 1:21 pm

nice design..

comments nasabi na..

keep it up..
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Post by Guest on Tue Oct 04, 2011 10:35 pm

vilpang wrote:nice design..

comments nasabi na..

keep it up..

salamat sir,.salamat po sa pagdaan.,Smile

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Post by qcksilver on Wed Oct 05, 2011 1:53 am

hinay-hinay muna sa paggamit ng maraming materials and colors, same study on composition and camera angles too. goodluck sir
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Post by Guest on Thu Oct 06, 2011 4:59 am

qcksilver wrote:hinay-hinay muna sa paggamit ng maraming materials and colors, same study on composition and camera angles too. goodluck sir


>>ahh ganun po ba sir.,.salamat sir qcksilver..ill try na mas simple.,

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Post by Guest on Fri Dec 09, 2011 6:12 pm

UPDATE KO LANG PO. Smile

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