Another Exterior 2

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good job and nice work....any workflow here??

3DZONE wrote:good job and nice work....any workflow here??

Ay sorry i forgot to mention 3ds Max 2012, Vray 2.0 with Solidrocks & Advanced Painter para dun sa mga damo thanks po sir for dropping by.

Nice job. Mukhang sa labas nalang talaga ipapark yang kotse mo ah. haha. Magkakalasan body kits nyan pag tumama sa rampa.

--The absence of defining shadows makes the scene flat..
--If by the absence of shadows you were going for an overcast look the BG sky fails to imply; right now it looks flat white..
--Car sticks out like a sore thumb on the first image..
--Driveway ramp needs work..
--If this is to be constructed in the Philippines those firewall windows & sunbreakers won't do..

--Nice design..

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without those Mahogany [?] timber finishes, this would look great. maybe change the colour to balance & not dominate. the windows are the main characters in this scene [I like the design].

actually, the car wasn't so bad on the first image. It wasn't the first thing that caught my eye. although, sa katagalan, namamagnet talaga ang mga mata mo.

nice work, overall!

Cheers!


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oRangE.n.GreeN wrote:.
without those Mahogany [?] timber finishes, this would look great. maybe change the colour to balance & not dominate. the windows are the main characters in this scene [I like the design].
actually, the car wasn't so bad on the first image. It wasn't the first thing that caught my eye. although, sa katagalan, namamagnet talaga ang mga mata mo.
nice work, overall!
Cheers!
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--Well you have to consider that you have the artist's "practiced" eye O&G; you automatically know where to zoom in on any given image & its subject, which makes you totally disregard the car & focus on the house at first glance. I actually made 4 people (lay people) here look at this image & asked them what caught their eye first. Your guess is as good as mine.

bokkins wrote:Nice job. Mukhang sa labas nalang talaga ipapark yang kotse mo ah. haha. Magkakalasan body kits nyan pag tumama sa rampa.

Hehe oo nga bro hindi na yan pwedeng ipasok sa loob sasayad

cloud20 wrote:--The absence of defining shadows makes the scene flat..
--If by the absence of shadows you were going for an overcast look the BG sky fails to imply; right now it looks flat white..
--Car sticks out like a sore thumb on the first image..
--Driveway ramp needs work..
--If this is to be constructed in the Philippines those firewall windows & sunbreakers won't do..

--Nice design..

oRangE.n.GreeN wrote:.


without those Mahogany [?] timber finishes, this would look great. maybe change the colour to balance & not dominate. the windows are the main characters in this scene [I like the design].

actually, the car wasn't so bad on the first image. It wasn't the first thing that caught my eye. although, sa katagalan, namamagnet talaga ang mga mata mo.

nice work, overall!

Cheers!


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cloud20 wrote:

oRangE.n.GreeN wrote:.
without those Mahogany [?] timber finishes, this would look great. maybe change the colour to balance & not dominate. the windows are the main characters in this scene [I like the design].
actually, the car wasn't so bad on the first image. It wasn't the first thing that caught my eye. although, sa katagalan, namamagnet talaga ang mga mata mo.
nice work, overall!
Cheers!
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--Well you have to consider that you have the artist's "practiced" eye O&G; you automatically know where to zoom in on any given image & its subject, which makes you totally disregard the car & focus on the house at first glance. I actually made 4 people (lay people) here look at this image & asked them what caught their eye first. Your guess is as good as mine.

Noted yan mga bro thanks actually yung car din yung unang nagustuhan ng mayari hindi yung bahay hahaha! GODbless!

eye catching ang orange car. pwede pa syang palitan or alisin. the second image is good except for the dark spots sa bandang trees. i think u ticked the SRGB here or too much postpro? anyways mahusay ka sa 3d modelling!

nice render..ibang klase

skill wise very good.. though render was good also but...

-bump on bricks baliktad yata..
-hindi papasa sa building inspector to firewall dapat sa gilid.

nice work on solidrocks magbabalik loob ka rin displacements ang missing for me... and yes... confusing ang gi mo... very evident sa car shot at main shot... i guess that firewall is for the carport only and meron ng setbacks for the remaining sides (optical illusion halos pareho kasi ng kulay) ... matindi ang pagkakagawa mo ng grass... my concern is hindi kaya magalit ang may-ari ng kabilang lote kasi andun ang metro mo ng tubig? nakalimutan ding lagyang ng texture ang dry leaves...

cloud20 wrote:--Well you have to consider that you have the artist's "practiced" eye O&G; you automatically know where to zoom in on any given image & its subject, which makes you totally disregard the car & focus on the house at first glance. I actually made 4 people (lay people) here look at this image & asked them what caught their eye first. Your guess is as good as mine.

Gotcha!


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