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Post by Agda on Wed Nov 23, 2011 4:23 am

Hi Cgp.... Dati ko pang minodel ito ngayon ko lang nairender. Isang concept house na naman.... Naiinspire kasi ako sa mga gawa ng masters dito sa CGP.... Comment naman po kayo para ma improve pa po mga gawa ko.... Cad,max,vray,ps... Smile





As per comment ni sir bokkins.... Update ko ang grass.... Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Updated with BG sky na... Smile




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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by arkiranz06 on Wed Nov 23, 2011 4:32 am

kakagigil ka talaga idol heheheh master of minimalist.
sky mo na lang cguro idol kasi plain lang sya eh... 2thumbsup
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by mokong on Wed Nov 23, 2011 4:34 am

wow sir nice yung composition mo dito lalo na yung design.. mas maganda pag may vignette at konting bloom effect sir.. I guess EA ito..


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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by RETAKS_06 on Wed Nov 23, 2011 4:45 am

wo wo wo wo! gagagaling sir!!! nice composition!!! inuman na
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by yaug_03 on Wed Nov 23, 2011 5:34 am

Add dirts , and change the BG.Nice composition.
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by cloud20 on Wed Nov 23, 2011 7:02 am

Love the cantilevers.. Siguro kaunting contrast lang for me..
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by zromel on Wed Nov 23, 2011 7:06 am

wow i love it. minimalist
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by vilpang on Wed Nov 23, 2011 9:39 am

design & render....like ....
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by archshade02 on Wed Nov 23, 2011 10:07 am

superb
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by celes on Wed Nov 23, 2011 10:26 am

comments ko lang:

1. as yaug mentioned, dirt pass and change the background.
2. foliage in general is good but the grass needs improvement - mas random sa scale siguro (slight lang) and the color looks dark.
3. i think you need to work on your materials. ung white wall, too glowy. in general most materials look flat - siguro add some glossiness values to the wood, slight bumps on the walls, etc
4. vertical and horizontal camera corrections on some of the camera views.
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by Agda on Wed Nov 23, 2011 2:15 pm

arkiranz06 wrote:kakagigil ka talaga idol heheheh master of minimalist.
sky mo na lang cguro idol kasi plain lang sya eh...
Salamat sir arkiranz.... Noted po yan sir.... Vraysky lang po kasi yan... Try to change it in my updates.... Smile
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by Agda on Wed Nov 23, 2011 2:17 pm

mokong wrote:wow sir nice yung composition mo dito lalo na yung design.. mas maganda pag may vignette at konting bloom effect sir.. I guess EA ito..
Salamat dun sa ginawa mo sir.... Pano mo ginawa yun sir? Smile Smile Very Happy
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Post by Agda on Wed Nov 23, 2011 2:18 pm

RETAKS_06 wrote:wo wo wo wo! gagagaling sir!!! nice composition!!!
Salamat sir Retaks..... Smile Smile Smile
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Post by Agda on Wed Nov 23, 2011 2:19 pm

yaug_03 wrote:Add dirts , and change the BG.Nice composition.
Noted po yan sir.... Salamat sa comment sir..... Smile Smile Smile
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by Agda on Wed Nov 23, 2011 2:20 pm

cloud20 wrote:Love the cantilevers.. Siguro kaunting contrast lang for me..
Salamat master cloud.... Noted din po yan.... Smile Smile Smile
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by Agda on Wed Nov 23, 2011 2:21 pm

zromel wrote:wow i love it. minimalist
Thanks zromel..... Smile Smile Smile
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by Agda on Wed Nov 23, 2011 2:22 pm

vilpang wrote:design & render....like ....
Salamat sir vilpang..... Smile Smile Smile
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Post by Agda on Wed Nov 23, 2011 2:25 pm

archshade02 wrote:superb
Salamat sir archshade..... Smile Smile Smile
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by Agda on Wed Nov 23, 2011 2:28 pm

celes wrote:comments ko lang:

1. as yaug mentioned, dirt pass and change the background.
2. foliage in general is good but the grass needs improvement - mas random sa scale siguro (slight lang) and the color looks dark.
3. i think you need to work on your materials. ung white wall, too glowy. in general most materials look flat - siguro add some glossiness values to the wood, slight bumps on the walls, etc
4. vertical and horizontal camera corrections on some of the camera views.
Noted po yan sir... Ill try to work and improve on all of the things uv mention master.... Salamat sa comment sir Smile Smile Smile Smile ....
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by arkibons on Wed Nov 23, 2011 5:16 pm

nice render and composition i just want to comment on how to maximized spaces or probably the owner wanted that way. sayang kc you have a decent size lot. anyway good job i like the style!
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by Agda on Wed Nov 23, 2011 9:15 pm

arkibons wrote:nice render and composition i just want to comment on how to maximized spaces or probably the owner wanted that way. sayang kc you have a decent size lot. anyway good job i like the style!
Salamat sir arkibons.... Noted po yan sir... Smile Smile Smile
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by rich on Wed Nov 23, 2011 10:15 pm

ganda sir! add ng konting dirt
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by princedaguz13 on Wed Nov 23, 2011 10:47 pm

superlike . clouds na lang sir hanap ka ng magandang exr or hdri.
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Post by boj on Wed Nov 23, 2011 10:51 pm

hanep!,.astig talaga mga gawa mo sir agda!,.
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Re: 3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Post by kjraf_011 on Thu Nov 24, 2011 12:31 am

for me, wala akong masabi sir, ang ganda po...
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