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An Ice Cream Parlor

Post by Razaec30 on Fri Dec 02, 2011 2:41 pm

This is my first post. Hope you like it.
comments and suggestions are welcome.

Software used:
3D Max 2010
Vray SP4 1.5
Photoscape

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Re: An Ice Cream Parlor

Post by mez on Fri Dec 02, 2011 2:55 pm

nice! thumbsup
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Post by Razaec30 on Fri Dec 02, 2011 10:01 pm

Thank you sir Mez, any criticism for my
improvement?
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Post by mez on Fri Dec 02, 2011 10:25 pm

Razaec30 wrote:Thank you sir Mez, any criticism for my
improvement?

for me, maganda na siya, kung pwede pa siguro maimprove yung lighting sa rear counter, at yung logo ng baskin-robbins maganda din sana kung lighted para magstandout, panalo na yung treatment mo sa wall at yung pendant light medyo mahina lang yung buga ng ilaw.
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Post by vilpang on Fri Dec 02, 2011 10:53 pm

very nice 1st post..i agree to master mez..

keep it up & good luck ....
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Post by modelrenz_2011 on Fri Dec 02, 2011 11:07 pm

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Re: An Ice Cream Parlor

Post by qcksilver on Sat Dec 03, 2011 12:18 am

ayun nilabas na rin,gusto ko yung 1st image ung iba kasi medyo blur, pendant light mataas yata,cove light pwede pang iimprove,minodel mo ba ung table?hindi kasi smooth ung legs nya overall maganda (wahahah)
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Re: An Ice Cream Parlor

Post by cloud20 on Sat Dec 03, 2011 1:07 am

Some cut-out people would be nice kahit silhouettes lang; just to break the "starkness" of the scene..

Otherwise; very good render na..
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