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MY FIRST RENDER

Post by joerem on Tue Dec 13, 2011 8:13 pm

good morning cgp..pashare lang po ako ng first render ko..c & c nalang po..
workflow: cad>sketchup>vray for su

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Post by jen_tol84 on Tue Dec 13, 2011 8:30 pm

nice first render sir.
indi ako master pero comment nadin ako;
-try to use hdri baka gaganda pa GI nito
-parang malalaki masyado ung road bumps
-parang nakakadistract masyado yang puno sa foreground
-mas maganda pa siguro kong dagdagan mopa ng cars since commercial area naman
-pasensya kana pero ayaw ko kay 'angry bird', hehe

tambay kalang lagi d2 kasi marami matututunan.

ito lang para sakin sir, other comments sa mga masters na. thanks for posting!
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Post by joerem on Wed Dec 14, 2011 9:33 am

salamat sa comments mo sir... thumbsup
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Post by joerem on Mon Dec 19, 2011 10:43 am

sir, pwede po bang ask nang tutorial sa hdri para sa GI..tia Smile
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Re: MY FIRST RENDER

Post by arkiedmund on Mon Dec 19, 2011 4:45 pm

Since first render mo ito, lipat na muna natin sa WIP section.

I'd like to see you working on this, and we will guide you along the way.

You're off to a good start.

some comments:

- overburn of your ceiling light. make sure vray plane light is set to invisible.
- better camera angle, apply a camera correction modifier, or vertical shift, whichever applies. this will be dependent on the type of camera used for the scene.
-not to keen on the angry birds backdrop. look for a better one.

Work on this some more and let's see some improvements.

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