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Post by niwrenhoj on Thu Mar 22, 2012 3:16 am












papost lang po uli di ko parin mabawasan yong jagged sa image i dont know kong jagged nga yong nakita ko oh may problema lang sa model ko at sa monitor ko jurassc era pa kas monitor ko. Very Happy comments nalang po mga master baka may alam kayong paraan para mabawasan if ever yong mga jagged edges maliban po sa comment dati n sir bokkins...tia
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Re: two storey practice render...

Post by arch_mirasol on Thu Mar 22, 2012 4:20 am

design is okey

render is too grainy

work only on shot no. 3

other angle shot 1 and 2 is not okey

you lose the drama of the shot by too much exposure

darken your trees maps

your sky is common use other sky background

your car paint is like a mirror or stainless use presets carpaint material

marami diyan sa tabi tabi.

the work effort is great nice start.. good luck on the next post
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Post by hotarubi on Thu Mar 22, 2012 5:07 am

PS'd ba yung BG mo? madalas mag jagged edge pag burn yung area, try to use catmul-rom as filter. btw good render set.
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Post by rosend III on Thu Mar 22, 2012 5:47 am

background lang sir, medyo mas napapansin yung mga trees.

Nice design
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Re: two storey practice render...

Post by niwrenhoj on Wed Mar 28, 2012 8:33 am

thanks po sa pagdaan...salamat din po sa mga comment...

too grainy nga po yong output...and i know kong bakit..hehe
reflection on my wall, lowering my lighting too much equals grainy output...nagkamali kasi ako ng intindi sa advice ni sir bokkins to lessen the jagged edges... Very Happy pero kahit ganun pinost ko pa rin po para makakuha ng comment po sa inyo...
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Post by jamesalbert on Wed Mar 28, 2012 8:51 am

sakin lang sir..yung mapping ng gate na brown...talaga bang nakatile yun? atsaka yung view 1 & 2 try to check your vertical shift...atsaka imply mo yung rule sa paggawa ng perspective light foreground equals to dark background and vice versa...para mabigyan pansin kung ano man ang subject mo..yung background ba or foreground Very Happy
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Post by niwrenhoj on Thu Mar 29, 2012 4:56 am

jamesalbert wrote:sakin lang sir..yung mapping ng gate na brown...talaga bang nakatile yun? atsaka yung view 1 & 2 try to check your vertical shift...atsaka imply mo yung rule sa paggawa ng perspective light foreground equals to dark background and vice versa...para mabigyan pansin kung ano man ang subject mo..yung background ba or foreground Very Happy

yong gate sir dala ng katamaran kaya di na inayos..hehe which is not good dapat kahit practice lang eh ayosin na...thanks sa pagdaan at sa comment..medyo similar sya doon sa naunang comment,commnet ni arch. mirasol...
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Post by oby20 on Sun Apr 01, 2012 7:42 am

image 3 ok sir
wag mo na lagyan ng frame, nasisira yun architectural presentation, nagmumukang picture frame.
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