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Post by sleepzawake on Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:56 pm

mga sir pakitadtad naman ng comments. kailangan ko na to mafinalize this week. hirap ako magdecide ng theme. saudi project po ito. salamat po. yun immediate boss ko magaling magrender ng free hand kaya pati mga bato ng shadow ng sun at yun reaction ng kulay pinapaayos niya. salamat po.




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Re: warehouse

Post by aesonck on Mon Apr 23, 2012 10:01 pm


Saturation> exposure> textures and camera range, adjustments.

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Re: warehouse

Post by sleepzawake on Mon Apr 23, 2012 10:51 pm

saan po yan sa max po?

pasensya na po baguhan lang sa max.

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Re: warehouse

Post by badongrodrigs on Mon Apr 23, 2012 10:59 pm

Repetitive trees on the left side, geometry problem (or something else) on the lower right side, lack of foreground elements on the left side, you could probably put more focus on the building and zoom a bit the camera.

And then do some heavy color correction in photoshop, the render looks too warm and saturated.

goodluck bro!
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Re: warehouse

Post by sleepzawake on Mon Apr 23, 2012 11:08 pm

salamat po sa inputs sir =) ok try ko po subukan yun suggestions niyo. hinde ko mazoom yun camera kase yun boss ko gusto yun overall feel. malake yun sky at foreground yun rule of thirds daw. kaya malayo yun camera ko. saudi po kase yun project kaya hinahabol ko yun mainit na feel. baka po may inputs kayo papaano makuha yun. salamat po.

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Post by badongrodrigs on Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:26 am

sleepzawake wrote:salamat po sa inputs sir =) ok try ko po subukan yun suggestions niyo. hinde ko mazoom yun camera kase yun boss ko gusto yun overall feel. malake yun sky at foreground yun rule of thirds daw. kaya malayo yun camera ko. saudi po kase yun project kaya hinahabol ko yun mainit na feel. baka po may inputs kayo papaano makuha yun. salamat po.

You can still achieve the basic rule of thirds even if you move your camera. For example, in the render, you are standing on the road. You could move your camera towards the left side so you're standing on the sidewalk, therefore giving you the chance to introduce some bushes and plants on the foreground.

And when i said "your render is too warm" i meant COLOR, not temperature. Your render is too yellow. You can balance out the colors by using Color Balance in Photoshop.
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Post by badongrodrigs on Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:40 am

This is what I'm talking about. Compare the two images. Smile Try to experiment with Color Balance, Selective Color and Saturation. Goodluck!

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Post by sleepzawake on Tue Apr 24, 2012 2:24 am

magaling!!! yan ba yun gawa mo??? ok sir dame layers papano ba yan?

sige try ko po mamaya. salamat madame.

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Post by qcksilver on Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:56 am

try mo ito sa photoshop sir, punta ka sa image/adjustment/photo filter/filter/cooling filter 80 or try mo lahat para makita mo anong gusto mo, then adjust ka nalang ng brightness/contrast
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Re: warehouse

Post by sleepzawake on Wed Apr 25, 2012 9:21 pm

salamat sa inputs sir =)

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