mixed use bldg (latex boysen render )

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eh try ko itong bagong category .dto ko nlang lagay ehhe kung tama po paglagyan ehe. kaya po eto cnc na , critics lang pala ehe
render po ito nung akoy chikiting nung 3rd year .. latex paint po tsaka pinicturan ko tsaka konting PS sa bg
unang sabak sa PS eh..
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salamat sa critiko . etoh naaaaaa

Jay2x wrote:distorted nga po siya ehe ganyan talaga ako mg persp puro champective lagi ang output..

bro no harms meant ha... kung sa una alam mo na na distorted pala ung output why not fixed it? and kahit bro tsampective kayang-kayang pagmukhaing "by the book". i guess it goes beyond the techniques and skills... it is the personality what matters most. kung paano ung mind set sa paggawa and hindi ung pwede na yan attitude. even we give comments and suggestions sa design it will not matter kasi presentation gives life to the design.

and one more thing... sir mushroom is 100% right. why going back to this work of yours during your college years ? i am sure napakarami mo ng development from that time till now kaya it will be more nicer if you will post your recent works and para makatulong naman kami sa abot ng aming makakaya bro.

mushroom wrote:

1. sky is a bit out of place
2. a lot of lines do not converge properly. this is pretty basic in manual rendering and you should concentrate on making sure the base plate is properly sketched first before you do any post editing.
3. supporting elements such as landscaping and entourage are both lacking and missing.
4. adjacent buildings are very haphazardly placed.

in general sir, this render fails in almost all aspects of a composition - perspective, textures, shading, materials. a lot needs to be tweaked in this image. pero ive seen your 3d renderings in the gallery, why not just focus on the 3d outputs rather than go back to this level?

notes taken sir mushroom..
personal reason po kasi kaya gusto ko mpausayan ang rendering ko in manual .. ito lang kasi ang matino na narender ko sa manual
promise sir and that's true.
ang gusto kopo kasi prang transition yung gagawin ko .. from manual rendering to matte painting sana..
post kana sir hehe

kietsmark wrote:

Jay2x wrote:distorted nga po siya ehe ganyan talaga ako mg persp puro champective lagi ang output..

bro no harms meant ha... kung sa una alam mo na na distorted pala ung output why not fixed it? and kahit bro tsampective kayang-kayang pagmukhaing "by the book". i guess it goes beyond the techniques and skills... it is the personality what matters most. kung paano ung mind set sa paggawa and hindi ung pwede na yan attitude. even we give comments and suggestions sa design it will not matter kasi presentation gives life to the design.

and one more thing... sir mushroom is 100% right. why going back to this work of yours during your college years ? i am sure napakarami mo ng development from that time till now kaya it will be more nicer if you will post your recent works and para makatulong naman kami sa abot ng aming makakaya bro.

oo nga po sir keit.. notes taken.. still nag aaral pa po ako sa skul...student pa po
dko po m fixed sa ps yung horizon sir hehe..
still trying pa .. ma2fi2xed ko yan next time sir as matte painting using mga brushes .

malaki pa po i gaganda nyan kahit sa ps,,,at kaya din mai correct yun roof,,,me nag yaring ganyan narin saken bro,,,mas malupet ka pa nga e,,latex ha,,

Muggz wrote:malaki pa po i gaganda nyan kahit sa ps,,,at kaya din mai correct yun roof,,,me nag yaring ganyan narin saken bro,,,mas malupet ka pa nga e,,latex ha,,

ok . oo nga bro.. kaya dito kona muna pinost sa others ehe yung level ko kasi pang misc,others palang dapat e hehe kaya dito nalang ako magpos2t palagi sa ICU
kaw din sir