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Post by ray_victor_benitez on Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:47 am

Fifth and Final Post on WIP at last
C&C's are welcome for improvement
Design & Render

Scene 1

Scene 2 (Flipped & Dusk)


Update 1

Update 2


Salamat sa mga comments... 2thumbsup


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Re: Two Storey Residential (Concept)

Post by juv21 on Wed Aug 22, 2012 10:57 am

nice design and render sir...
1st image- thumbsup
2nd image- try to add lighting sir some portion at the interior para mas maganda tignan.
-parang di bumagay sa akin yung background compared sa environment/lighting na nagamit mo sir.(imho)

try to add background elements, trees, neighboor or ect.
but it's just a suggestion sir baka kasi sa actual eh vacant pala talaga...hehehe

the rest,okay na okay sir....tfs
keep posting... 2thumbsup
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Re: Two Storey Residential (Concept)

Post by ray_victor_benitez on Wed Aug 22, 2012 12:39 pm

juv21 wrote:nice design and render sir...
1st image- thumbsup
2nd image- try to add lighting sir some portion at the interior para mas maganda tignan.
-parang di bumagay sa akin yung background compared sa environment/lighting na nagamit mo sir.(imho)

try to add background elements, trees, neighboor or ect.
but it's just a suggestion sir baka kasi sa actual eh vacant pala talaga...hehehe

the rest,okay na okay sir....tfs
keep posting... 2thumbsup


Salamat sir i'll take your advice...no neighbors yan because of sketchup and v4su..everytime maglalagay ako ng additional plants or other entourage nag e_error na sya when I try to render..maybe I'll try it in PS..l could try to light up the interior in my repost .. Very Happy
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Re: Two Storey Residential (Concept)

Post by brodger on Thu Aug 23, 2012 8:14 am

ganda nito sir ray..galing din ng update..
iedit niyo na lang po itong thread at i-add po yung update niyo dito. TFS po! thumbsup
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Re: Two Storey Residential (Concept)

Post by ray_victor_benitez on Fri Aug 24, 2012 5:57 am

brodger wrote:ganda nito sir ray..galing din ng update..
iedit niyo na lang po itong thread at i-add po yung update niyo dito. TFS po! thumbsup


ok na po sir brodger! kaya po pala hindi ko ma edit kasi hindi ako aka naka log in Laughing


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Re: Two Storey Residential (Concept)

Post by ray_victor_benitez on Fri Aug 24, 2012 6:00 am

Sir juv21 nag try po ako mag vignette..hindi ko po ala if tama na..salamat sa suggestions mo po laking tulong
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Re: Two Storey Residential (Concept)

Post by jaffisan on Fri Aug 24, 2012 7:06 am

nice one kuya. kaso sa first image parang laki ng scope na kinain ng road. focus mo nalang sana yung iba sa subject Smile over all -- hippie more posts Smile
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Re: Two Storey Residential (Concept)

Post by ray_victor_benitez on Fri Aug 24, 2012 7:23 am

jaffisan wrote:nice one kuya. kaso sa first image parang laki ng scope na kinain ng road. focus mo nalang sana yung iba sa subject Smile over all -- hippie more posts Smile


napansin ko nga din..gusto ko kasi sana wide range kaso wala naman akong nailagay na entourage..salamat sa tips..
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Re: Two Storey Residential (Concept)

Post by PAD on Fri Aug 24, 2012 9:46 pm

Nice work sir! 2thumbsup

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Re: Two Storey Residential (Concept)

Post by pocholo codilla on Fri Aug 24, 2012 9:51 pm

ganda ng design and render sir. hippie
-kulang lng inputs sa background to create drama on your scene thumbsup
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Re: Two Storey Residential (Concept)

Post by reimhedz on Fri Aug 24, 2012 9:54 pm

nice design!
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Re: Two Storey Residential (Concept)

Post by ray_victor_benitez on Sat Aug 25, 2012 12:19 pm

pocholo codilla wrote:ganda ng design and render sir. hippie
-kulang lng inputs sa background to create drama on your scene thumbsup


Salamat sa inyo! Next time I'll work naman on background..para ma emphasize yung environment and effect..
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Re: Two Storey Residential (Concept)

Post by de3t3r4 on Sat Aug 25, 2012 8:55 pm

galing nyu na po.... keep posting lang po...
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Re: Two Storey Residential (Concept)

Post by cloud20 on Sat Aug 25, 2012 8:57 pm

The problem with back lit scenes, when done improperly, yield incomplete results; yours lack illumination from the front (referring to the first image) The lit scenes fare better but not by much. As for framing, learn the rule of thirds. The subject doesn't have to always be in the middle of the frame.
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Re: Two Storey Residential (Concept)

Post by ray_victor_benitez on Sun Aug 26, 2012 9:59 am

cloud20 wrote:The problem with back lit scenes, when done improperly, yield incomplete results; yours lack illumination from the front (referring to the first image) The lit scenes fare better but not by much. As for framing, learn the rule of thirds. The subject doesn't have to always be in the middle of the frame.



Salamat sir cloud sa tips and comments...nagbasa ako about rule of thirds pero hindi ko po masyado nakuha...aral pa po talaga ako..
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