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Post by jay3design on Tue Feb 17, 2009 8:51 pm

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hi guys tagal na walng post ito share ko lng tng lobby renovation Max vray PS C&C r welcome

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Salamat sa mga nagcomment, ito nga pala yng Update my mga nabago ng kunti. nabago ko na din yng BG madalian kc kaya d ko na napansin hehehe... tnx to all

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Re: Condo Lobby _ Update

Post by cubi_o: on Sat Feb 21, 2009 4:53 am

hi sir jay... very well executed sir! the flaws had been corrected already.

nice image sir!!! 2thumbsup

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Re: Condo Lobby _ Update

Post by jay3design on Sat Feb 21, 2009 9:27 pm

LWF wrote:
abl_langs wrote:
LWF wrote:RATING based on a 100pt sore system that I am testing out to make it easier for people who are busy and don't have much rime to leave a comment that at least shows what area of the rendering is good or not so good.

100pts breakdown

20% = modeling (M)
25% = texturing and materials (T)
25% = lighting (L)
10% = entourage (E)
10% = composition and story (CS)
10% = x-factor or overall wow effect (X)

Multiply this total by the degree of difficulty (0.9 being the simplest model and 1.0 being the hardest/more complex scenes)

So for this rendering:

thanks bro sa pagdaan

M = 20
T = 23
L = 24
E = 9
C = 10
X = 10
SUB-TOTAL = 96
Degree of Difficulty = .95
TOTAL SCORE = 91.2

0 - 25 pts = very poor
26 - 50 pts = poor
51 - 65 pts = average
66 - 80 pts = good
81 - 90 pts = very good
91 - 100 pts = excellent

To all those confused about the numerical scoring, its just an idea to pass along C&C without any personal attachment or subjective tone. A number is a number, it does not say "panget" or "hayop sa galing" but is just a number void of any emotion and is more measurable than an emotional comment like "galing" or "hanep". I would assume people in this forum would be mature enough to appreciate a straight forward analysis such as this once they place "C&C welcome" in their post and not get offended by the lack of patronization, or am I being too optimistic?

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sir jay, pasensya ha OT lang ako saglit.. hehehe..

sorry sir LWF pero mahina ako sa math eh, and i think this pts thing is to time consuming, might just as well tell whats wrong and suggest how to improve it directly, not just leave a score and left the guy hanging.. Basketball

actually the points thing is very fast using cut and paste. Very Happy i just change the numbers.

as for making detailed comments on renderings, please have mercy, that's what i do every day Very Happy (that is actually true, i sort of manage multiple CG teams). anyway i will try my best to give more detailed comments when i have more time.

sidenote, the image above has very little flaws, the only thing that kept it from getting really, really high score is the degree of difficulty. the model is very good but not hard to build. there are not enough custom models that are intricate to warrant a higher difficulty rating.

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Re: Condo Lobby _ Update

Post by jds on Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:52 pm

camera distortions lang but superb tulo laway ko hehehe peace man buttrock
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Re: Condo Lobby _ Update

Post by basky07 on Sun Feb 22, 2009 12:55 am

ayus to tol..keep it up!idol! :lytsaber:
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Re: Condo Lobby _ Update

Post by jay3design on Mon Feb 23, 2009 12:23 am

SunDance wrote:hey jay, lighting is spot on.... 2thumbsup very neat eye candy....

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you're points system looks good on my monitor it's so technical but i doesnt really cover how the the TS got his hi & lows.. a straight forward CnC (IMHO) with little bits of hints on how to improve the visual will be much appreciated.. peace man

thanks bro sa pagdaan inuman na
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Post by MR. HOCK on Tue Feb 24, 2009 4:44 am

the best 'tong gawa nyo sir... for me "Class A"
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Post by pigface on Tue Feb 24, 2009 9:09 am

sir jay nice output . ganda ng ambiance. inuman na
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Re: Condo Lobby _ Update

Post by jay3design on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:13 pm

SunDance wrote:hey jay, lighting is spot on.... 2thumbsup very neat eye candy....

little OT
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you're points system looks good on my monitor it's so technical but i doesnt really cover how the the TS got his hi & lows.. a straight forward CnC (IMHO) with little bits of hints on how to improve the visual will be much appreciated.. peace man

thanks bro
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Post by jay3design on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:13 pm

pintura wrote:cge tol kita kits sa EB..hoy abel magcompute k kc yan tuloy bngyan k ng formula..tara abel mag-enroll tau sa lorong 28 balita ko magaling sla sa math dun Very Happy

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Re: Condo Lobby _ Update

Post by jay3design on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:14 pm

wireframan wrote:Ganda ng pag ka render ang linis! galing! gusto ko yung 2nd image. but may c&c lang ako.. ang chandelier hindi masyadong interesting tingnan maybe mahina ang lighting, at ang mga downlights parang flat ang ilaw.. parang walang effect sa scene..should reflect on the floor..opening sa gitna nakakatakot ang dilim. lastly sa flooring hindi makita ang dugtungan ng tiles or maybe ganyan lang talag ang design? yun lang po.. I hope makatulong and c&c ko. good luck!!

thanks bro & sa comment
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Re: Condo Lobby _ Update

Post by jay3design on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:14 pm

tian-tian wrote:great reneder sir jds..walang katulad

thanks bro
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Post by jay3design on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:15 pm

ytsejeffx wrote:parekoy!.......hataw gawa mo ah, galing ng lighting and scene composition...
tutorials naman jan hehehe..... 2thumbsup

thanks parekoy sa susunod ulit na post kaw post kana ulit
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Post by jay3design on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:16 pm

cubi_o: wrote:hi sir jay... very well executed sir! the flaws had been corrected already.

nice image sir!!! 2thumbsup

salamat bro
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Post by jay3design on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:16 pm

jds wrote:camera distortions lang but superb tulo laway ko hehehe peace man buttrock

salamat bro sa pagbisita Crazy_Lion
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Post by jay3design on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:17 pm

basky07 wrote:ayus to tol..keep it up!idol! :lytsaber:

salamat bro sa pagdaan mo
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Post by jay3design on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:17 pm

MR. HOCK wrote:the best 'tong gawa nyo sir... for me "Class A"

salamat bro sa pabisita
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Post by jay3design on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:17 pm

pigface wrote:sir jay nice output . ganda ng ambiance. inuman na

salamat bro mamaya ng yng EB natin sa LP
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Re: Condo Lobby _ Update

Post by adis on Thu Feb 26, 2009 7:36 pm

Ang ganda sir jay, hope we can see tutorial nito for us newbie. Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven
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Re: Condo Lobby _ Update

Post by callow_arki28 on Fri Feb 27, 2009 7:29 am

sir ganda po nang gawa nyo! sana matuto din ako nito!
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Post by taga_probins on Sat Feb 28, 2009 5:58 am

sir jay...sir jay...paano ka ginawa? cartman wala ako masay...galing tlaga...keep it up, bro! thumbsup
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Post by jay3design on Fri Mar 06, 2009 12:31 am

adis wrote:Ang ganda sir jay, hope we can see tutorial nito for us newbie. Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven

cge bro thanks alot bro
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Post by jay3design on Fri Mar 06, 2009 12:40 am

callow_arki28 wrote:sir ganda po nang gawa nyo! sana matuto din ako nito!

salamat bro
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Post by jay3design on Fri Mar 06, 2009 12:41 am

taga_probins wrote:sir jay...sir jay...paano ka ginawa? cartman wala ako masay...galing tlaga...keep it up, bro! thumbsup

thanks bro sa pagdaan Crazy_Lion
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Post by creativemind on Sun May 18, 2014 9:29 am

Elegante Sir...ganda 2thumbsup  2thumbsup  2thumbsup
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Post by srm852002 on Sat May 24, 2014 9:01 am

Humataw ka na naman Jay..
Galing. Pang front page na naman ito a. hippie
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