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Re: SUNSET
Sir Jarul...hirap talagang magpalipas ng oars ha...gumaganda ang mga gawa
siguro sir a bit BUMP lang sa mga materials mo, the rest are really awesome, very romantic....nice job bro



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Re: SUNSET
3DZONE wrote:Sir Jarul...hirap talagang magpalipas ng oars ha...gumaganda ang mga gawasiguro sir a bit BUMP lang sa mga materials mo, the rest are really awesome, very romantic....nice job bro
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tnx po ser,,,oo nga,,bored masyado dito.,,


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Re: SUNSET
correct me if i'm wrong ha, I think the foreground models render should be a bit darker kasi against the light sya. Not unless your looking for an HDR effect na render then ok to, but otherwise masyadong maliwanag sa akin.
cheers

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Re: SUNSET
eyecon01 wrote:correct me if i'm wrong ha, I think the foreground models render should be a bit darker kasi against the light sya. Not unless your looking for an HDR effect na render then ok to, but otherwise masyadong maliwanag sa akin.cheers
ok po ser...noted po,,tnx..


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Re: SUNSET
nice practice bro.. ok yan..tulou tuloy mo lang..

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Re: SUNSET
Butz_Arki wrote:nice practice bro.. ok yan..tulou tuloy mo lang..
tnx po ,,

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Re: SUNSET
nice


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Re: SUNSET
dickie_ilagan wrote:nice
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tnx bossing..

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Re: SUNSET
jarul,
i dont have an issue with rendering, i just want to critique the composition. You might want to apply one of the old trick in composition. avoiding putting line in the middle. (simple lang kasi lines always divide the composition into two halves. kung baga parang dito ako duon ka, and automatically they create division...
I am attaching here a cropped version to show my point. (i have cropped the right side of the structure parang you give sense of continuity to the mind of the viewer. ang nangyari kasi tapos na yung edge at mukhang bitin. by cropping it, naggshift yung line more to the right na.. so hindi na sya one half one half ngayon.
i also darken some areas using ps to have more contrast to the sunset and the structure...
i hope you dont mind kung pinotoshop ko to

i dont have an issue with rendering, i just want to critique the composition. You might want to apply one of the old trick in composition. avoiding putting line in the middle. (simple lang kasi lines always divide the composition into two halves. kung baga parang dito ako duon ka, and automatically they create division...
I am attaching here a cropped version to show my point. (i have cropped the right side of the structure parang you give sense of continuity to the mind of the viewer. ang nangyari kasi tapos na yung edge at mukhang bitin. by cropping it, naggshift yung line more to the right na.. so hindi na sya one half one half ngayon.
i also darken some areas using ps to have more contrast to the sunset and the structure...
i hope you dont mind kung pinotoshop ko to

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Re: SUNSET
tnx po master noms sa crits ang sugestion. ..noted po lahat,,,,



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Re: SUNSET
nomeradona wrote:jarul,
i dont have an issue with rendering, i just want to critique the composition. You might want to apply one of the old trick in composition. avoiding putting line in the middle. (simple lang kasi lines always divide the composition into two halves. kung baga parang dito ako duon ka, and automatically they create division...
I am attaching here a cropped version to show my point. (i have cropped the right side of the structure parang you give sense of continuity to the mind of the viewer. ang nangyari kasi tapos na yung edge at mukhang bitin. by cropping it, naggshift yung line more to the right na.. so hindi na sya one half one half ngayon.
i also darken some areas using ps to have more contrast to the sunset and the structure...
i hope you dont mind kung pinotoshop ko to
very nice sir nomer..very nice...

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Re: SUNSET
nice work sir 


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Re: SUNSET
galing nito bro.. bumabanat ka ahhh kahit walang project.. hehehe...

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