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Post by jarul on Wed Feb 18, 2009 3:32 pm

msat po mga master..post lng po,,palipas oras ko po ngaun,,la kac magawa eh,,,the gazebo model ay napulot ko lng po sa net
at sinalpak ko lng sa scene,,,paki cc po masters,,TIA



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Re: SUNSET

Post by 3DZONE on Wed Feb 18, 2009 3:44 pm

Sir Jarul...hirap talagang magpalipas ng oars ha...gumaganda ang mga gawa Very Happy siguro sir a bit BUMP lang sa mga materials mo, the rest are really awesome, very romantic....nice job bro 2thumbsup peace man

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Re: SUNSET

Post by jarul on Wed Feb 18, 2009 3:49 pm

3DZONE wrote:Sir Jarul...hirap talagang magpalipas ng oars ha...gumaganda ang mga gawa Very Happy siguro sir a bit BUMP lang sa mga materials mo, the rest are really awesome, very romantic....nice job bro 2thumbsup peace man


tnx po ser,,,oo nga,,bored masyado dito.,, thumbsup

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Re: SUNSET

Post by eyecon01 on Wed Feb 18, 2009 3:57 pm

correct me if i'm wrong ha, I think the foreground models render should be a bit darker kasi against the light sya. Not unless your looking for an HDR effect na render then ok to, but otherwise masyadong maliwanag sa akin. Very Happy cheers

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Re: SUNSET

Post by jarul on Wed Feb 18, 2009 4:00 pm

eyecon01 wrote:correct me if i'm wrong ha, I think the foreground models render should be a bit darker kasi against the light sya. Not unless your looking for an HDR effect na render then ok to, but otherwise masyadong maliwanag sa akin. Very Happy cheers


ok po ser...noted po,,tnx.. thumbsup

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Re: SUNSET

Post by Butz_Arki on Thu Feb 19, 2009 1:10 am

nice practice bro.. ok yan..tulou tuloy mo lang..

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Re: SUNSET

Post by jarul on Thu Feb 19, 2009 1:57 am

Butz_Arki wrote:nice practice bro.. ok yan..tulou tuloy mo lang..


tnx po ,,

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Re: SUNSET

Post by dickie_ilagan on Thu Feb 19, 2009 2:48 am

nice



Very Happy Smile

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Re: SUNSET

Post by jarul on Thu Feb 19, 2009 2:56 am

dickie_ilagan wrote:nice



Very Happy Smile


tnx bossing..

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Re: SUNSET

Post by nomeradona on Thu Feb 26, 2009 5:52 am

jarul,

i dont have an issue with rendering, i just want to critique the composition. You might want to apply one of the old trick in composition. avoiding putting line in the middle. (simple lang kasi lines always divide the composition into two halves. kung baga parang dito ako duon ka, and automatically they create division...

I am attaching here a cropped version to show my point. (i have cropped the right side of the structure parang you give sense of continuity to the mind of the viewer. ang nangyari kasi tapos na yung edge at mukhang bitin. by cropping it, naggshift yung line more to the right na.. so hindi na sya one half one half ngayon.

i also darken some areas using ps to have more contrast to the sunset and the structure...

i hope you dont mind kung pinotoshop ko to



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Re: SUNSET

Post by jarul on Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:01 am

tnx po master noms sa crits ang sugestion. ..noted po lahat,,,, Very Happy thumbsup

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Re: SUNSET

Post by jadamat on Thu Mar 12, 2009 12:40 am

nomeradona wrote:jarul,

i dont have an issue with rendering, i just want to critique the composition. You might want to apply one of the old trick in composition. avoiding putting line in the middle. (simple lang kasi lines always divide the composition into two halves. kung baga parang dito ako duon ka, and automatically they create division...

I am attaching here a cropped version to show my point. (i have cropped the right side of the structure parang you give sense of continuity to the mind of the viewer. ang nangyari kasi tapos na yung edge at mukhang bitin. by cropping it, naggshift yung line more to the right na.. so hindi na sya one half one half ngayon.

i also darken some areas using ps to have more contrast to the sunset and the structure...

i hope you dont mind kung pinotoshop ko to



very nice sir nomer..very nice...

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Re: SUNSET

Post by demonpepper on Sat May 09, 2009 9:26 am

nice work sir thumbsup

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Re: SUNSET

Post by mokong on Sat May 09, 2009 9:34 am

galing nito bro.. bumabanat ka ahhh kahit walang project.. hehehe...

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