AUSTRIA: Lighting and Texture Competition (Godfather House-UPDATED)

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Ito ang aking Obra Maestra na pinamagatang Godfather House. Isang Obra maestra na kung saan ay naglalahad hango sa isang pelikulang pinilahan s puting tabing "The GODFATHER". Isang obra na nabuo mula s imahinasyon na kung saan ay naglalarawan s isang madilim n sulok n pamamalagi ng isang bida n leader ng sindikatong ito. Ginamitan ng konseptong ito ng mga elemento tulad ng sigarilyo,alak,baril at kapirasong papel n may nkasulat n wanted upang ipahatid s tumitingin ang kabuuang istorya nito. Ang madramatikong ilaw at Pulang rosas sa sahig ay simbolo na kung saan ay nagpapakita ng pagka misteryosong buhay ng Godfather. Sana po ang maibigan ninyo ang aking obra maestra.

"THE GODFATHER HOUSE"



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reggie0711 wrote:nice concept sir.. prng movie sa sinehan ah... tgnan mo lng my storya na nkkta...

Gagalakan s aking puso ang iyong pagpupuri bro!!!...akoy umaasa n maging isa k s kalahok s kompetisyong ito..

di sir ako sumali...medyo marami pa dapat akong aralin...bago pa lang ako sa rendering...next tym sali na ako!hehehhehe

bro nice job here, i guess comment ko nalang sir, yung sa mga picture frames, para syang plasma screen. good luck sir.

>>lens flare=corny...
>>wrong scale & perspective for the armchair & side table, halatang pinaste lang; hence mali shadow casting nila---correct me if i'm wrong...
>>candles on the right side should be casting some illumination; i know youre going for a "madilim" scene yet it shouldn't be pitch black...
>>volume light seems to have been drawn with a straight edge, not realistic at all...
>>the godfather (one word lang po yan) with all his money can only afford linoleum floors?...
>>side table is blocking the fireplace baka masunog yan...

as of now i can't feel the drama yet...
nice effort though...

cloud20 wrote:>>lens flare=corny...
>>wrong scale & perspective for the armchair & side table, halatang pinaste lang; hence mali shadow casting nila---correct me if i'm wrong...
>>candles on the right side should be casting some illumination; i know youre going for a "madilim" scene yet it shouldn't be pitch black...
>>volume light seems to have been drawn with a straight edge, not realistic at all...
>>the godfather (one word lang po yan) with all his money can only afford linoleum floors?...
>>side table is blocking the fireplace baka masunog yan...

as of now i can't feel the drama yet...
nice effort though...

Maraming salamat at ipagpaumanhin nyo po ang aking nakayanan!!!!