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two storey residential bldg.

Post by frank april albaira jorge on Wed Apr 03, 2013 12:20 am

share kulang ulit mga master... xenxa na isang view lang siningit kulang sa work...
comments and critics are welcome for improvement

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Post by Rheinfell on Wed Apr 03, 2013 1:13 am

nice design sir masyadong colorful lang yung scene (composition), maraming umaagaw ng attention Smile remove mo na lang siguro yung motor at yung pink na color na halaman (palitan mo nalang ng iba) masyado kasi matingkad.
*glass material pwede pa ma-improve..
*bluesh mo siguro yung sky or palitan mo either HDRI or vraysky.. give some contrast sa building & background...
*about sa design naman, better pang accent mo na lang yung ashlar, pwede na din replace mo ng white color (IMHO) sa may left side. TFS
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Post by frank april albaira jorge on Wed Apr 03, 2013 1:30 am

noted po......salamat master sa pagdaan.....

Rheinfell wrote:nice design sir masyadong colorful lang yung scene (composition), maraming umaagaw ng attention Smile remove mo na lang siguro yung motor at yung pink na color na halaman (palitan mo nalang ng iba) masyado kasi matingkad.
*glass material pwede pa ma-improve..
*bluesh mo siguro yung sky or palitan mo either HDRI or vraysky.. give some contrast sa building & background...
*about sa design naman, better pang accent mo na lang yung ashlar, pwede na din replace mo ng white color (IMHO) sa may left side. TFS
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