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two storey residential bldg.

Post by frank april albaira jorge on Thu Apr 04, 2013 8:34 am

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share kulang ulit mga master.. comment and critics for more improvement.

thanks in advance

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Re: two storey residential bldg.

Post by Rheinfell on Thu Apr 04, 2013 9:30 am

mas maganda ang composition at design sir 2thumbsup maaliwalas na.. 2thumbsup
IMHO, last comment sa color: yung puting wall entry ng service area (sa may left corner) palitan mo na lang ng kulay na same sa katabing kulay niya at yung ashlar palitan mo na din ng dark color, same color sa mga lining... masyado kasi matingkad ang ashlar at in actual mas mahal yan kaysa paint..
*tapos taas mo konti yung opening, level mo sa door height mas bagay.. 2thumbsup

*i would suggest render mo ulit babaan mo gamma try 1.5.. masyadong mataas ang 2.2 tapos yung shrub mo sa may harapan, iba ibahin mo orientation & size niya para di masyado uniform tingnan.... yun lang sir

hippie just give a try Very Happy TFS
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Re: two storey residential bldg.

Post by frank april albaira jorge on Thu Apr 04, 2013 9:47 am

noted po master...salamat sa pagdaan.... 2thumbsup



Rheinfell wrote:mas maganda ang composition at design sir 2thumbsup maaliwalas na.. 2thumbsup
IMHO, last comment sa color: yung puting wall entry ng service area (sa may left corner) palitan mo na lang ng kulay na same sa katabing kulay niya at yung ashlar palitan mo na din ng dark color, same color sa mga lining... masyado kasi matingkad ang ashlar at in actual mas mahal yan kaysa paint..
*tapos taas mo konti yung opening, level mo sa door height mas bagay.. 2thumbsup

*i would suggest render mo ulit babaan mo gamma try 1.5.. masyadong mataas ang 2.2 tapos yung shrub mo sa may harapan, iba ibahin mo orientation & size niya para di masyado uniform tingnan.... yun lang sir

hippie just give a try Very Happy TFS
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