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Post by nyx214 on Mon Nov 11, 2013 9:57 pm

hello, this is my simple dining comments are very much appreciated. thanks
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Re: simple dining

Post by Bizmen on Tue Nov 12, 2013 6:09 am

IMHO, marami ka dapat na iconsider rito.
1) models -choose models that is right to your scene or to your title description.
2) pay attention with the models that are intersecting to each other, (your jar at the rear that intersect with the open shelves.
3) height of lighting/ selections -this is not a good idea. Imagine you are going to eat and the light is just 1 foot away from the glass table. Maintain your standard clearance.
4) scaling of the models -check if the models are proportionally to the other models. Wine bottle is to small for your table setup.
5) finishes -walls and floors have to match your scene. 

that's all, think how you are going to convince someone to like your idea. its like you are going to use it.

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Re: simple dining

Post by hedgedread on Wed Nov 13, 2013 12:51 am

That's what you call "Keen eye on details"..wew! Nice comments!
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Re: simple dining

Post by nyx214 on Thu Nov 14, 2013 3:52 am

thank you sir for the effort to give pointers to improve Smile
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Re: simple dining

Post by bokkins on Thu Nov 14, 2013 5:26 pm

nyx214 wrote:thank you sir for the effort to give pointers to improve Smile
Try to revise the render based in the comment para kita ang progress. Good luck! Rendering is good. All you need to do is do the adjustments on scaling and make the scene right.
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Post by Gensan on Fri Nov 15, 2013 11:05 pm

Bizmen wrote:IMHO, marami ka dapat na iconsider rito.
1) models -choose models that is right to your scene or to your title description.
2) pay attention with the models that are intersecting to each other, (your jar at the rear that intersect with the open shelves.
3) height of lighting/ selections -this is not a good idea. Imagine you are going to eat and the light is just 1 foot away from the glass table. Maintain your standard clearance.
4) scaling of the models -check if the models are proportionally to the other models. Wine bottle is to small for your table setup.
5) finishes -walls and floors have to match your scene. 

that's all, think how you are going to convince someone to like your idea. its like you are going to use it.
agree ako dito..galing mo sir pasilip din ng render ko pag naka pag upload ako ha.
@TS  - ok na sa akin ung illumination..follow mo nalang si Bizmen. goodluck.
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Re: simple dining

Post by qcksilver on Sat Nov 16, 2013 11:44 pm

add ko lang smoke doesn't look natural,
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Re: simple dining

Post by nyx214 on Wed Nov 27, 2013 2:02 am

bokkins wrote:
nyx214 wrote:thank you sir for the effort to give pointers to improve Smile
Try to revise the render based in the comment para kita ang progress. Good luck! Rendering is good. All you need to do is do the adjustments on scaling and make the scene right.
noted po :)salamat sir bokkins sa pag daan. Smile
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Re: simple dining

Post by nyx214 on Wed Nov 27, 2013 2:05 am

qcksilver wrote:add ko lang smoke doesn't look natural,
ok po sir! ill try to improve! maraming salamat sa pag daan Smile
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