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Post by archmanlapao on Thu Mar 06, 2014 12:07 am

Pa share mga sir, some design & render of mine c & c are very much welcome







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Re: REST HOUSE IN THE MIDDLE

Post by Revitsky on Thu Mar 06, 2014 12:24 am

1st, stone po ba talaga yung material ng door frame? parang hindi po bagay sa door. 2nd, i think hindi na kelangan ng tension rod sa eaves ng entrance kasi fully supported na sya ng post/wall. 3rd, parang patay po yung kulay ng building, puro dark po kasi. parang mabigat sa kalooban pumasok jan. mas maganda po kung light ang color ng stone para magkaroon ng contrast sa brown wall. opinyon ko lang po.
render-wise, impressive.  thumbsup  cher............


nabago na pala yung design sa last 3 images.  affraid


Last edited by lezoji on Thu Mar 06, 2014 8:56 pm; edited 2 times in total
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Re: REST HOUSE IN THE MIDDLE

Post by archmanlapao on Thu Mar 06, 2014 12:34 am

Salamat sa comments sir,jamb and architrave is wood the stone until the jamb and coverved by the architrave, the color black is a marble tiles, about the tension bar i forgot to remove because that was the first design. thanks for comments sir,
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Post by ydnarniculac on Thu Mar 06, 2014 4:11 pm

Sir lezoji, para'ng nakaka-offend naman yung taktika ng comment nyo! Don't judge anyone in this post, just saying your opinion!
Para'ng nakasasama naman ng loob ng isang tao ang mga banat nyo...
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Post by Zyl on Thu Mar 06, 2014 4:54 pm

Design and Render dude wise! Smile
Comment ko lng dude. try to lessen your lens flare.   gdluck
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Re: REST HOUSE IN THE MIDDLE

Post by Revitsky on Thu Mar 06, 2014 8:52 pm

ydnarniculac wrote:Sir lezoji, para'ng nakaka-offend naman yung taktika ng comment nyo! Don't judge anyone in this post, just saying your opinion!
Para'ng nakasasama naman ng loob ng isang tao ang mga banat nyo...
sir constructive naman po ang comment ko, hindi po tayo matututo sa tama, hindi ko naman po nilait lahat ng gawa nya, pinansin ko lang po yung sa opinyon ko ay mali. sa totoo lang, wala pong maling design, lahat yan tama KUNG...........maja-justify mo kung bakit ganon ang design mo. otherwise magiging mali yan sa iba.  peace man
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Re: REST HOUSE IN THE MIDDLE

Post by archmanlapao on Thu Mar 06, 2014 11:05 pm

Sorry guys,i well never be offended to anyone,and i dont need also respect to anyone,its enough for me to share my works,you are free to critics for the good of someone you criticize but make sure you are morethan good enough to whom you critisize otherwise you disqualified your self,dont teach grade 5,when you are grade 1,there are two types of ctiticism either for good or bad,before you criticisize examine carefully firts.thaks
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Post by Revitsky on Thu Mar 06, 2014 11:42 pm

archmanlapao wrote:Sorry guys,i well never be offended to anyone,and i dont need also respect to anyone,its enough for me to share my works,you are free to critics for the good of someone you criticize but make sure you are morethan good enough to whom you critisize otherwise you disqualified your self,dont teach grade 5,when you are grade 1,there are two types of ctiticism either for good or bad,before you criticisize examine carefully firts.thaks
that's your opinion sir, i respect that. but for me, hindi po kelangan maging mas magaling ka sa pinupuna mo para magkaroon ka ng karapatan na punahin sya. take for example Frank Gehry, a world renowned architect, he designed the world famous "walt disney hall". marami ang pumuna(hindi mga arkitekto) sa design ng building na to dahil sa materials na ginamit, pero kahit mataas na ang level ni gehry, nakinig sya sa mga puna ng mas mababa sa kanya. kaya itinama nya ang maling nagawa nya sa design nya.
hope you get my point sir.  Smile
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Post by jumboojum on Thu Mar 06, 2014 11:46 pm

ahhh.. OT na.. lets focus on the pics mga sir.Very Happy Peace!

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Post by archmanlapao on Fri Mar 07, 2014 12:29 am

May be in your side that is ok,but for me is no that is we called hypocrisy you are trying to teach by the works of others not yours,you will never understand in some situation if you youself couldn't goes on same situation,means what you teach or critics is unreality in your personal life,as i said there are 2 types of critism is for good or bad,make also that you can give example from you own experience.thanks
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Post by Revitsky on Fri Mar 07, 2014 12:38 am

archmanlapao wrote:May be in your side that is ok,but for me is no that is we called hypocrisy you are trying to teach by the works of others not yours,you will never understand in some situation if you youself couldn't goes on same situation,means what you teach or critics is unreality in your personal life,as i said there are 2 types of critism is for good or bad,make also that you can give example from you own experience.thanks
no offense sir, pero tingin ko po mas maipapaliwanag nyo ng mas malinaw ang punto nyo kung sasabihin nyo po sa tagalog.  I love you
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Post by kurdaps! on Fri Mar 07, 2014 7:20 am

Healthy discussion please....thanks.

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Re: REST HOUSE IN THE MIDDLE

Post by ydnarniculac on Sat Mar 08, 2014 5:08 pm

lezoji wrote:
ydnarniculac wrote:Sir lezoji, para'ng nakaka-offend naman yung taktika ng comment nyo! Don't judge anyone in this post, just saying your opinion!
Para'ng nakasasama naman ng loob ng isang tao ang mga banat nyo...
sir constructive naman po ang comment ko, hindi po tayo matututo sa tama, hindi ko naman po nilait lahat ng gawa nya, pinansin ko lang po yung sa opinyon ko ay mali. sa totoo lang, wala pong maling design, lahat yan tama KUNG...........maja-justify mo kung bakit ganon ang design mo. otherwise magiging mali yan sa iba.  peace man

Medyo tama ka'rin sir, but it's not a good way to deliver your criticism or comment. Just like you said in other post, you said that" it's look like a gasoline station" pa'ra sa akin is not a part of opinion, isa ito'ng insulto pa'ra sa isang gumawa ng plano... Sana naman, think twice.... he he he he walang personalan.. peace!!
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Post by jaypee_842002 on Tue Apr 08, 2014 1:07 am

Ok naman ang render at settings. kulang lang siguro ang pag ka edit sa Photoshop try mo wag gamitan ng lens flair medyo madilim lang sa may entrance try mo adjust pra kita ung detalye. at isa pa huwag na kau magbangayan... C&C po tau dito. ang sabihin nu nalang pra matapus yan ay, Sir Lezoji post mo mga latest gwa mo pra matuto po kami. ganun nalang po sabihin nu. andito tau sa site na to pra magpalitan ng sariling kaalaman. un lamang po ang aking commento. nice render yan sir...

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Post by orignaorig on Tue Apr 08, 2014 2:19 am

the render is good.
medyo konting laro lang po sa color combination para mahanap natin yung tamang timpla na babagay sa bahay.  thumbsup
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Re: REST HOUSE IN THE MIDDLE

Post by qcksilver on Wed Apr 09, 2014 12:53 am

mas maganda siguro kung lagay mo ung sun sa harap para magkaroon ng depth ung render, mukhang heavy nga tignan ung building, design wise i respect it its your concept.

off topic, wala namang problema kahit sino magcomment or paano ideliver ung comment sabi mo nga, "c & c are very much welcome". nasa sau nalang ung kung pakikinggan mo o hindi
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Post by archi_ram on Wed Apr 09, 2014 6:40 am

qcksilver wrote:mas maganda siguro kung lagay mo ung sun sa harap para magkaroon ng depth ung render, mukhang heavy nga tignan ung building, design wise i respect it its your concept.

off topic, wala namang problema kahit sino magcomment or paano ideliver ung comment sabi mo nga, "c & c are very much welcome". nasa sau nalang ung kung pakikinggan mo o hindi
Take it from the master....sir qcksilver....try to visit his posts and you will learn....anyways, design is good, materials are ok...try to follow on qcksilver's advise...and you will never regret...cheeerss thumbsup
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Post by dairybrylle on Wed Apr 09, 2014 7:36 pm

archmanlapao wrote:Sorry guys,i well never be offended to anyone,and i dont need also respect to anyone,its enough for me to share my works,you are free to critics for the good of someone you criticize but make sure you are morethan good enough to whom you critisize otherwise you disqualified your self,dont teach grade 5,when you are grade 1,there are two types of ctiticism either for good or bad,before you criticisize examine carefully firts.thaks

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I hate to interfere but this statement really caught my attention. Sir, there are indeed two types of criticisms: (1) the destructive criticism and (2) the constructive one. They're both essential for an individual's growth but you only get either of the two depending on how you take a given opinion. Please do consider this as a constructive one, though you're free to take this the other way around. I respect your beliefs, Sir, but I cringed to the thought that a grade 1 student cannot teach someone who's grade level is higher than him.  First, we don't know everything. Believing that you're better than the other is another form of arrogance. Arrogance comes in when a person doesn't take an opinion from people who's educational level is below than him. For instance, a business man who wants to learn how to grow rice needs to learn from farmers. If he's arrogant enough to listen, would that help him learn something?




My point is, let us not be arrogant here. Just because you think you're better than that person doesn't mean that person can't teach you anymore. You're maybe ahead of him but there are things that he knows that you probably don't know. 




Anyway, the render's good but you really have to consider your choice of materials.  Wink 
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Post by orignaorig on Wed Apr 09, 2014 8:21 pm

off topic: just a piece of advice:
if you enter a lion's den, don't expect to be treated like a king.   peace man
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