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Post by eisa on Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:43 am

practice lang po... constructive comments and critiques nman dyan =)


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Re: black n white

Post by dickie_ilagan on Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:02 am

Too clean and contrast it with some greenie plants randomly... Very Happy Smile
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Re: black n white

Post by ERICK on Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:25 pm

it seems u have an IES casting on the wall but no pinlight above? must be careful with this... the carpet is too thick for me IMHO... and you should increase your displacement a bit on this... anyways nice environment lighting you got here cheers inuman na
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Re: black n white

Post by Butz_Arki on Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:38 pm

i agree with erik..but nice render
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Re: black n white

Post by cloud20 on Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:51 pm

excellent, sir/mam eisa... i would have to disagree with sir dickie; "greenie plants" would only mar the otherwise exquisite cleanliness of the overall theme, IMHO...
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Re: black n white

Post by novice on Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:08 pm

your render is good ma'm/sir. smooth and minimalist design. great! keep it up! thumbsup

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Re: black n white

Post by raven on Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:49 pm

ELO SIR!!NICE OUTPUT SIR!! GNDA PO NG AMBIENCE MLMIG PO S MATA!!POST MORE SIR.. thumbsup
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Re: black n white

Post by jay3design on Tue Oct 14, 2008 9:32 pm

nice render malinis keep it up post pa thumbsup
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Re: black n white

Post by nomeradona on Tue Oct 14, 2008 10:34 pm

beautiful and simple. i love the neutral tone, but it need a splash of color (kaunti lang siguro)
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Post by nyop on Tue Oct 14, 2008 11:35 pm

simple and naturalistic men Very Happy
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Re: black n white

Post by cubi_o: on Tue Oct 14, 2008 11:44 pm

hi sir...nice lighting...cgro add mo pa ng konting mga abobots sa scene.

i like the design...simple.

kip em coming!!! welcome to CGP ma'am/sir!!!!!!! Crazy_Lion
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Re: black n white

Post by owenski on Wed Oct 15, 2008 12:18 am

nice set, clean.... 2thumbsup
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Re: black n white

Post by arki_vhin on Wed Oct 15, 2008 1:01 am

wow...asrtig design ha...ok n yan...monochromatic style ang dating
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Re: black n white

Post by kurdaps! on Wed Oct 15, 2008 1:36 am

Simple yet effective...love that carpet. What a Face

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Re: black n white

Post by zildjian on Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:22 am

you need to rearrange the furnitures,they're too far away from each other..and considering its orientation and distance from the television..but the rendering is good to go..
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Re: black n white

Post by Guest on Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:16 am

very minimalist... pero nde po ba masyadong plain yata ung drop ceiling nyo? un lang po comment ko... enjoy ur stay here in cgp. Very Happy

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Post by Guest on Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:21 am

Great renders Eisa..SImple pero rock..cguro add na lng po ng curtains or blinds sa mga window and sliding doors..Yun lng po.Keep posting po and Keep it up !!! thumbsup

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Re: black n white

Post by eisa on Thu Oct 16, 2008 4:19 am

thank you all guys sa mga comments and critiques nyo...

sa uulitin hippie

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Re: black n white

Post by jds on Thu Oct 16, 2008 6:49 am

thicknesslng ng carpet sir pero astig ganda po design
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Re: black n white

Post by master_grayback on Sat Oct 18, 2008 7:24 am

sir chris ayos na ung render mo..cguro gawin mo medyo yellowish ung mga ilaw mo pra may kunting contrast... thumbsup plus ung add mo ung comment ng iba..panalo na yan!! hehehe post pa!
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