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Cavite Project

Post by jracsamson on Tue May 13, 2014 10:31 pm

Mga Sir Papost lang po. Kindly post your criticism of my work for future improvement


Update ko lang po based sa comments: Can't add reflection of the trees bumabaagal kasi sa pagrender kpg madaming trees. upgrade muna ng CPU.



Update: Ok lang po ba di ko tanggalin yun dati for comparison.



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Re: Cavite Project

Post by Argel on Tue May 13, 2014 11:34 pm

nice design sir  2thumbsup 
add more entourage nlng siguro..
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Re: Cavite Project

Post by jracsamson on Wed May 14, 2014 1:31 am

Thanks, request ng owner na wala muna. Pero magpopost ako ng complete. Thanks again.

Kailangan ko pa siguro matuto lalo na sa post production sa PS.

Any tips?

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Re: Cavite Project

Post by Norman on Wed May 14, 2014 1:59 am

- add camera vertical shift.

- masyado reflective yung ground....katapos lang ng ulan ba talaga intention mo?

- yung ceiling mo na wood, metal ba sya talaga or wood strips?. parang di tama

- yung stone material mo work on it medyo parang barbecue ang dating sa pagkapula.

- lastly add more reflection sa glass mo. on opposite side put trees para may ma reflect yung mga glass. trees or building. 

- design wise maganda sya  thumbsup
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Re: Cavite Project

Post by jracsamson on Wed May 14, 2014 2:48 am

Norman wrote:- add camera vertical shift.

- masyado reflective yung ground....katapos lang ng ulan ba talaga intention mo?

- yung ceiling mo na wood, metal ba sya talaga or wood strips?. parang di tama

- yung stone material mo work on it medyo parang barbecue ang dating sa pagkapula.

- lastly add more reflection sa glass mo. on opposite side put trees para may ma reflect yung mga glass. trees or building. 

- design wise maganda sya  thumbsup

Thank you sir will update my work based on your inputs

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Re: Cavite Project

Post by jracsamson on Thu May 22, 2014 8:48 pm

Updates were provided

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Re: Cavite Project

Post by Viper_01 on Thu May 22, 2014 10:09 pm

nice design sir comment lng po yung shadow po pki taas  yung sud divs level,yung glass po mas maganda lagyan mu ng reflction kunte,,,for p.s. naman tray to balance yung hue saturation nya lalo na sa plants mu,,,pati midtones shadows mu   thumbsup
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Re: Cavite Project

Post by Norman on Fri May 23, 2014 2:30 am

bro medyo marami pa rin aayusin....if you will send me the file gawan ko ng another version kung ok lang....send it to my email at nmcaguit@gmail.com or via wetransfer.com...all credits belongs to you dont worry.
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Re: Cavite Project

Post by jracsamson on Fri May 23, 2014 3:01 am

Norman wrote:bro medyo marami pa rin aayusin....if you will send me the file gawan ko ng another version kung ok lang....send it to my email at nmcaguit@gmail.com or via wetransfer.com...all credits belongs to you dont worry.

No problem sir send you the max file para matulungan nyo din po ako to improve.

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Re: Cavite Project

Post by Norman on Fri May 23, 2014 4:53 am

jracsamson wrote:
Norman wrote:bro medyo marami pa rin aayusin....if you will send me the file gawan ko ng another version kung ok lang....send it to my email at nmcaguit@gmail.com or via wetransfer.com...all credits belongs to you dont worry.

No problem sir send you the max file para matulungan nyo din po ako to improve.


send ko sayo ulit yung max file pag na render na....
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Re: Cavite Project

Post by jracsamson on Tue May 27, 2014 9:39 pm

update

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