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Post by Guest on Sat Oct 11, 2014 1:26 pm

Magandang Araw sa lahat CGPinoy, Post ko tong nakaraang render ko..Comments and Suggestions are very much appreciated.SALAMAT!.

3dsmax14/vray2.40/PS






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Post by i3dness on Sun Oct 12, 2014 11:35 am

Nice one! thumbsup
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Post by Guest on Mon Oct 20, 2014 3:02 am

i3dness wrote:Nice one! thumbsup

salamat po bossing! Very Happy

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Post by sentido on Mon Oct 20, 2014 3:17 am

in your 2nd image.. parang may "black line" sa edge ng wall.. may displacement ba yung wall mo? if that's the case and you are using vraydisplacementmod.. enable mo yung "keep continuity" para mawala yung "black line"
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Post by Guest on Mon Oct 20, 2014 6:21 am

sentido wrote:in your 2nd image.. parang may "black line" sa edge ng wall.. may displacement ba yung wall mo? if that's the case and you are using vraydisplacementmod.. enable mo yung "keep continuity" para mawala yung "black line"
>>ahh ganun po ba Bossing, kaya pala..oo tama po kayo vraydisplacementmod ang ginamit ko.maraming salamat po. buttrock

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Re: Exterior-05

Post by destijl_art on Mon Oct 20, 2014 6:35 am

Hi, your modeling and rendering is good to go, just a few suggestions
1. Desaturate the sky, if it was done in PS better to replace it, not complimenting your structure.
2. Also desaturate the foreground foliage and grass.
3. Decrease the blue tone add a little bit of warm tone to balance the color.
4. Check the size of your cars, it seems the saloon is much bigger than the SUV.
5. I like the composition of the first image just zoom it out a little bit and maybe add a personĀ 
at the balcony right next to the window so it will fall in one of the rule of thirds point it will add additional interest to it.
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