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Post by elisecorpuz on Mon Oct 20, 2014 4:49 am

Hello Everyone

It's my first time to post here  Very Happy

I just want to share my recent work. Im still a beginner in 3d modeling. 

would love to hear your thoughts!  Smile

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Re: Teen Room

Post by destijl_art on Mon Oct 20, 2014 7:00 am

Hi Elise, Welcome to CGP! now regarding your rendering I would suggest you also 
include some information about the 3d software and rendering engine you 
use to generate this image so everyone can give you appropriate advice, going back to the image I think you
should change the flooring it looks like a worn out linoleum but you are in a good start with your modeling, 
now for the lighting the clay render below shows that you are using both natural and
interior lighting that i would recommend and try to study studio lighting technique its good for interior.
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Re: Teen Room

Post by elisecorpuz on Mon Oct 20, 2014 9:15 pm

Hello!  

I used Autodesk Maya and Mental Ray. 

Thanks for the Advices!  Smile
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Re: Teen Room

Post by sentido on Mon Oct 20, 2014 10:10 pm

- needs improvement on materials and finishes (place diffuse maps, reflections, etc.)

- check scale and proportion of furniture

- study layout of furniture
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Re: Teen Room

Post by elisecorpuz on Tue Oct 21, 2014 12:34 am

noted! thanks!
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welcome..

Post by abdullahglor on Tue Oct 21, 2014 2:32 am

it's good for a first timer...ok naman yung render colorful(feminine) type. mejo adjust lang sa material.
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Re: Teen Room

Post by elisecorpuz on Tue Oct 21, 2014 2:58 am

Thank you! I still got a lot to learn  Very Happy
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Re: Teen Room

Post by sunji_lacsi on Sat Oct 25, 2014 7:46 am

hi elise! welcome to CGP! ok lang sana ang dating parang toon scene lang siya. you could have chosen a better flooring to match it to your motif... Smile  surely marami kang matototonan dito...
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Re: Teen Room

Post by elisecorpuz on Sat Nov 01, 2014 1:28 am

thank you Laughing
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