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Post by renzmarionbarican on Sun Dec 07, 2014 2:00 am

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Re: Tanghalang Balagtas

Post by renzmarionbarican on Sun Dec 07, 2014 2:02 am

comments and suggestions pls.. Smile thank you mga sir

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Re: Tanghalang Balagtas

Post by kensweb on Sun Dec 07, 2014 4:57 am

sir musta? to be honest sir, need pa ng improvement dito, pero kung sa mga basics lang, like sky, camera angle, composition & texture, yun siguro pinaka dapat mo ayusin. Search ka lang sa google image ng reference para may guide ka. ano po bang mga softwares ang pagprocess mo dito?

kung gusto mo i-try itong exterior tutorial na gawa ni sir khamrender,member din sya dito. ito yung tutorial link video nya:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Iq7MLnVsSrE
I hope makatulong din sayu to for more improvements. ask ka lang din sa mga members dito if you need help, or post ka ng thread sa help line. Smile
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Post by renzmarionbarican on Sun Dec 07, 2014 5:35 am

hi sir kensweb..Artlantis 4 po..cge po ichecheck ko po.. thank you sir sobrang malaking tulong po.. Very Happy

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Post by kensweb on Sun Dec 07, 2014 5:37 am

aba, parang bago sa pandinig ko yan ha, hehehe, try mo boss studiomax or sketchup. good luck
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Post by renzmarionbarican on Sun Dec 07, 2014 5:57 am

opo sir.. salamat po.. Popost ko po ulet yung latest.. Smile salamat po ulet

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Post by sentido on Sun Dec 07, 2014 6:46 pm

wag puro orange ang sky.. kung gusto mo talaga may orange ang sky try mo may pagka gradient yung sky mo from orange to blue

imho, shadows should be a little bit softer

parang malaki scale ng plants

I think may mas maganda pang camera angle kaysa dito

yung mga ibon parang nag aaway sa itaas.. hanap ka yung pa-letter V yung position nila para mas presentable tingnan

yung horizon parang puro usok.. research sa location nung project kung puro bundok ba o mga buildings yung sa paligid.. kahit jpeg lang yung background ok na yun Wink

if you can add more details sa building mas maganda.. like yung stairs sa harap ng building mo usually nagrerequire ng handrail yan sa magkabilang gilid at sa haba nyan siguro pati sa gitna dapat may handrail.. how about ramp for pedestrian? parking lines? walkway? at yung mga slanting na columns sa harap ng building mo parang nakalutang?

sa mga building na may maraming glass sa façade.. importante aware ka kung ano nirereflect ng mga salamin mo para maging presentable yung exterior rendering mo Wink right now.. I can see blue strips sa windows.. di ko sure kung part yun ng color scheme mo or may nirereflect ka na dagat sa harap ng building mo Wink

sana makatulong ang lahat ng ito hehe
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Post by rlaguerta on Sun Dec 07, 2014 8:05 pm

ah kaya pla pamilyar ung sky kc artlantis din gamit ko dati sa rendering nmin  sa opis..! try mo paglaruan ung reflection at fresnel ng glass materials mo..
ano modeler mo d2?
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Post by renzmarionbarican on Mon Dec 08, 2014 2:43 am

sir sentido Thank you po.. cge popost ko po ulet gawa ko ng mas ok Smile sir rlaguerta opo cge po aayusin ko pa yung reflection Smile thank you po Smile2thumbsup2thumbsup2thumbsup2thumbsup2thumbsup

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Post by renzmarionbarican on Mon Dec 08, 2014 2:53 am

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Post by renzmarionbarican on Mon Dec 08, 2014 2:55 am

sir di ko pa alam kung gantong view gusto nyo makita.. eheheh tapos po yung reflection ok na po ba? yung sa sky po tinanggal ko na lng po.. kase required po pa la kame mag nght scene..tapos sir di ko pa po naayos yung handrails pls. wa po kayo mag sawa mag comment and suggest ty po bounce

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Re: Tanghalang Balagtas

Post by kensweb on Mon Dec 08, 2014 4:13 am

pre, ok lang ang lighting at mood, pero maganda, lagyan mo rin sa loob para mas elegant tignan. tapos over size yung mga tao mo, halos hahakbangan nalang yung sasakyan, hehehe, siguro ilipat mo rin yung cars para mapansin din ang signage. tapos add mo ng evening sky, yung tipong mag-gagabi palang.

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Re: Tanghalang Balagtas

Post by renzmarionbarican on Mon Dec 08, 2014 5:28 am

sir kensweb thank you.. ou nga po noh.. oversize.. tapos sir yung texture po ba ok na? cge po ayusin ko po yung lighting sa loob.. sa thursday ko na po kase ipapasa to..eheheh thank you po thumbsup

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