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Post by debbie ardagon on Mon Dec 15, 2014 1:49 am

gud day po mga masters,share ko lang po tong fast render ko about my project.i would like to seek comments again from you...thanks po.  [img][/img]  [img][/img]
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Post by jervinayad03 on Mon Dec 15, 2014 2:57 am

ang ganda sir ah ano workflow mo sir?
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Re: proposed one storey office building in iloilo

Post by kensweb on Mon Dec 15, 2014 6:39 am

sobrang busy pards ng scene, try mo i-lessen, kasi nawawala yung focus sa structure mo. mas nafofocus sa tao, ibon at mga kotse. yung sky din medyo macontrast against sa structure mo. no need to light up since maaraw naman, just my opinion pre.
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Post by debbie ardagon on Mon Dec 15, 2014 5:42 pm

noted pards...by the way wf=sketchupPro8+PScs3
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Post by rlaguerta on Mon Dec 15, 2014 6:18 pm

ask ko lng ano render engine nito?
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Post by debbie ardagon on Mon Dec 15, 2014 8:43 pm

vray bossing
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Re: proposed one storey office building in iloilo

Post by Norman on Tue Dec 16, 2014 10:56 pm

dont's
- too much leaves
- people keep it simple...may secu pa
- sky, check for reference...di naman ganyan ang sa reality...blue na blue and dapat pa gradient yan.....pa-puti sa malayo
- marami masyadong color and texture sa design mo...mukhang chop suey
- birds not a good idea
- cars not a good idea.
- lights(on) not a good idea

focus on your house not to the surrounding elements....

yung vertical v -column mo sa harap, kung hindi sya structurally able, aesthetically pangit sya..ang dami daming nakikita....
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Post by debbie ardagon on Wed Dec 17, 2014 11:57 pm

thank you po master norman...noted lahat ng comments mo..improve ko pa sa mga next project presentations ko.
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Re: proposed one storey office building in iloilo

Post by jg1124 on Thu Dec 18, 2014 1:10 am

Nice concept  Bro! thumbsup to much palm tree in the front no need for that why? Shocked because its blocking your design remove those Damm birds Why?  Shocked Its an Old School perception  Very Happy just make a simple Asphalt on the front Good Job! Mate  Very Happy
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