3 Storey Residence day and night view

hello to all!

This is my first post. Praktis praktis lng po, c&c's are very much welcome and appreciated para po madagdagaan ang kaalaman sa rendering. Done in 3ds max desgin 2009 with Vray 1.5 SP2 demo. Thanks!

DAY VIEW


NIGHT VIEW

nice rendering and design sir. . off lng ung malaki wall sa tabi. .

You are there, the modeling is fine.

My first suggestions are stay focus on day scene first, night scene is hard to learn. Do the camera corrections and crop your image, leave the important subjects of your scene. On the left, it has an empty space and nothing in there to show. Camera should be on eye level, that's the best way for presentation.

I notice those vines are flying, minimize your foliage.

All the best and keep us updated.

Welcome to CGP.

sir aldrin, welcome po sa cgp. not bad at all, lapit narin sir at maaachieve mo na yung gusto mong scene, tambay ka lang dito, daming points to learn from our masters. thanks for posting.

WOW GALING AS A BEGINNER KEEP IT UP BRO

una sir .. Camera view.. normal human eye view, for better presentation
at sa mga background, maganda, namerge or blended sa view, night scne kc sir medyo exagerated yung BG.. nice first post and welcome sa cgp sir

Invincible wrote:nice rendering and design sir. . off lng ung malaki wall sa tabi. .

thank u po sir...i'll check that

kurdaps! wrote:You are there, the modeling is fine.

My first suggestions are stay focus on day scene first, night scene is hard to learn. Do the camera corrections and crop your image, leave the important subjects of your scene. On the left, it has an empty space and nothing in there to show. Camera should be on eye level, that's the best way for presentation.

I notice those vines are flying, minimize your foliage.

All the best and keep us updated.

Welcome to CGP.

thanks sir kurdaps! i'll note these...thanks for sharing your ideas!

Sir,
Welcome dito sa forum.. You have the skills na.. try to explore muna ang day scene.. Position camera into different angle.. Malaman mo rin kung anong best perspective niya.. keep it up always..

malapit kana bro...kunting ayos pa sa materials kasi un ang nagpapaganda ng render..

-grass masyadong matingkad ang kulay at ung ibang foliages

the rest..ayos na

sir sa akin contrast lang ibaba mo,, sa grass din palitan mo,,, mas maganda man's eye view,, good luck,,

Sir,
very nice render & lighting,,ganda design sir..first post palang yan ha..abangan ko p yung mga susunod mo n ipopost sir,tnx for sharing..keep it up!

dre astig kala. posmor

welcome to cgp ser.... imho ser. masyado ata malalim ung camera.... and ung colors antapang tingnan... specially the grass... berdeng berde... nice lighting ser. agree with ser kurdaps comments! post more ser