ESKRAPAN (reflection of the Philippine poverty)

hi guys,
i just wanna share you one of my personal strokes
feel free to critique.. ^_^;



beginners luck i guess hehe

best
-MONztre Ink-

Astig bro! welcome to cgp! galing ng gawa mo dito. Hope to see more of your works! baskug!

Astig bro, Welcome to CGP. Its nice to have another Ilonggo here besides me and Bokkins... May iban pa ayhan na ilonggo di boks? (I will talk in Tagalog though, so that the others may understand.. sorry)

Anyway, astig tong gawa mu bro! I love all the details and the effort you placed in this one. You could actually see how long this might have taken to create. My only comment is composition wise... the details are great pero at the same time they look too much... Nawawala yung focus ko sa subject and for some odd reason, my eyes always goes back to the sky.

Siguro if there were a bit more contrast between the subject and the background or a defining color (like making her suit white) could have given me much more and the painting clearer.

Also don't be afraid to take out that Watermark. Honest po ang mga peeps dito sa CGP, we trust each other kayat makikita mu namang we don't place watermarks too.

Thanks again for sharing and trully an awesome piece.

P.S. Are you Arfien?

thanks bros for the suggestions... hehe
yup anyways maybe ill omit the watermarks next time

im an arfien student before.. but a frustrated bs architecture. hehe

thanks for appreciating my works..
you too have a great potentials..
keep it rock'n ilonggos...

best
-MONztre Ink-

Astig nito

kung sa pagkain ito...manamit!hehehhe,galing...bat naman frustrated archi?tuloy mo lang pangarap mo bro!

paturo nalang hehee

nice.

nice and full of detail

galing mo bro..ano gamit mo jan filterz lang..

@noninar : hehe thanks for viewing..
by the way theres no filter effects here, its all manual detailing and photo textures ^_^;..

baskog ubra mo ba, perti na effect ba.. kmuzta ang bacolod?
katahom sang ubra mo, damo pa da?

oy mga ilonggo damo kamo di gali.....ilonggo mang ko!!...mi kaupod na gali ko, bagohanon langko di pero matambay nako di ah...salamat...nice piece tol...ganda nang concepto mo...more post, tuloy lang!!

Pagon To, Galing pagyamanin mo pa ang talent mo Sir, nandyan na