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Post by silvercrown on Sun Jan 24, 2010 8:59 am

I've been struggling in finding time to play, learn and finish my entry. My objective was to learn how to use Vue Xtream with 3Dsmax and render it in Vray, i have a little success. I end up playing with the standalone Vue instead.

My Concept:
A poem by my favorite poet Pablo Neruda

The Light Wraps You

The light wraps you in its mortal flame.
Abstracted pale mourner, standing that way
against the old propellers of the twighlight
that revolves around you.

Speechless, my friend,
alone in the loneliness of this hour of the dead
and filled with the lives of fire,
pure heir of the ruined day.

A bough of fruit falls from the sun on your dark garment.
The great roots of night
grow suddenly from your soul,
and the things that hide in you come out again
so that a blue and palled people
your newly born, takes nourishment.

Oh magnificent and fecund and magnetic slave
of the circle that moves in turn through black and gold:
rise, lead and possess a creation
so rich in life that its flowers perish
and it is full of sadness.

Sunrise:


Sunset:


Night:


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Re: silvercrown: 1st Exterior Rendering Competition

Post by bongskeigle on Sun Jan 24, 2010 9:07 am

nice concept...aabangan namin yan sir... thumbsup

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Re: silvercrown: 1st Exterior Rendering Competition

Post by silvercrown on Sun Jan 24, 2010 9:10 am

bongskeigle wrote:nice concept...aabangan namin yan sir... thumbsup

thanks master bong! aabangan ko rin yung entry mo... 2thumbsup

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Post by 3DZONE on Sun Jan 24, 2010 10:29 pm

hhhmmm...kakaiba ang idea mo....dagsa ang ilaw dito....mukhang maganda ang resulta nito....aabangan ko to. gdluck

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Post by Stryker on Sun Jan 24, 2010 10:45 pm

nice sir....! Good luck sir ha....! thumbsup

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Post by jenaro on Sun Jan 24, 2010 10:47 pm

go go go,cheer lang ako sayo sir!

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Post by ortzak on Sun Jan 24, 2010 11:24 pm

Very nice idea po 2thumbsup gdluck

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Post by corpsegrinder on Mon Jan 25, 2010 5:05 am

mukhang magiging makulay to sir ah... gudluck! thumbsup

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Post by Yhna on Mon Jan 25, 2010 6:38 am

nice... abangan ko to... good luck sir thumbsup

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Re: silvercrown: 1st Exterior Rendering Competition

Post by 3dpjumong2007 on Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:22 am

si cloud asan na? di dapat exempted mga senior nito he he he he! Very Happy abangan ko bro ang banats mo.. Very Happy

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Re: silvercrown: 1st Exterior Rendering Competition

Post by silvercrown on Thu Jan 28, 2010 8:16 pm

bongskeigle wrote:nice concept...aabangan namin yan sir... thumbsup


3DZONE wrote:hhhmmm...kakaiba ang idea mo....dagsa ang ilaw dito....mukhang maganda ang resulta nito....aabangan ko to. gdluck


Stryker wrote:nice sir....! Good luck sir ha....! thumbsup


jenaro wrote:go go go,cheer lang ako sayo sir!


ortzak wrote:Very nice idea po 2thumbsup gdluck

corpsegrinder wrote:mukhang magiging makulay to sir ah... gudluck! thumbsup

Yhna wrote:nice... abangan ko to... good luck sir thumbsup

3dpjumong2007 wrote:si cloud asan na? di dapat exempted mga senior nito he he he he! Very Happy abangan ko bro ang banats mo.. Very Happy

Thanks po sa inyo mga masters!
Done some study and testing on my scene, mukhang di kakayanin ng machine ko! Sad
Hopefully by the end of the week meron akong prelim, i don't know if i could stick to my original concept though... Rolling Eyes
Whew...

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Re: silvercrown: 1st Exterior Rendering Competition

Post by silvercrown on Fri Jan 29, 2010 10:31 pm

I decided to change concept.... di ko kaya yung una kong concept... too complicated for me and my machine...
I decided to go with an environment scene...

My WIP's are on the 1st page...

This is very preliminary, hopefully i'll do a better scene....
Comments and suggestions po mga masters are highly appreciated

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Post by ortzak on Fri Jan 29, 2010 10:34 pm

Nice Wip po sir!! vue po pa gamit nyo? 2thumbsup

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Post by Noel_Diaz on Sat Jan 30, 2010 12:44 am

nice concept sir,,, aabangan ko ito...keep it up!!! thumbsup

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Re: silvercrown: 1st Exterior Rendering Competition

Post by logikpixel on Sat Jan 30, 2010 6:30 am

I was really hoping to see the original concept kahit mga preliminary renders. Anyhow, this new concept looks promising. A better POV is what I suggest. And maybe lose some of the thick foliage beneath the tower and add some elements like a boat and some dock. (Nakialam na sa composition, sensya na sir.) Just my two cents. Smile

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Re: silvercrown: 1st Exterior Rendering Competition

Post by silvercrown on Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:06 am

ortzak wrote:Nice Wip po sir!! vue po pa gamit nyo? 2thumbsup

Noel_Diaz wrote:nice concept sir,,, aabangan ko ito...keep it up!!! thumbsup

Thanks po mga sirs! vue po gamit ko, i should have wanted to use vue xstream w/ 3ds max and vray...

logikpixel wrote:I was really hoping to see the original concept kahit mga preliminary renders. Anyhow, this new concept looks promising. A better POV is what I suggest. And maybe lose some of the thick foliage beneath the tower and add some elements like a boat and some dock. (Nakialam na sa composition, sensya na sir.) Just my two cents. Smile

Thanks for the suggestions master! 2thumbsup

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Re: silvercrown: 1st Exterior Rendering Competition

Post by silvercrown on Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:11 am

My Concept:
A poem by my favorite poet Pablo Neruda

The Light Wraps You

The light wraps you in its mortal flame.
Abstracted pale mourner, standing that way
against the old propellers of the twighlight
that revolves around you.

Speechless, my friend,
alone in the loneliness of this hour of the dead
and filled with the lives of fire,
pure heir of the ruined day.

A bough of fruit falls from the sun on your dark garment.
The great roots of night
grow suddenly from your soul,
and the things that hide in you come out again
so that a blue and palled people
your newly born, takes nourishment.

Oh magnificent and fecund and magnetic slave
of the circle that moves in turn through black and gold:
rise, lead and possess a creation
so rich in life that its flowers perish
and it is full of sadness.

OT:
Here are links to the more popular poem by Neruda "If you forget me"

as read by "Madonna": http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mP0CkbbNfVU
the text: http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/if-you-forget-me/

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Re: silvercrown: 1st Exterior Rendering Competition

Post by ryansantos on Sun Feb 07, 2010 5:18 pm

dami ng sumasali ha!..nice view and environment scene...but your concept is too far from reality....siguro pwedi pa dyan kung light house or parola....isip kapa ng ibang concept...good luck nalang sayo and to all participants!

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Re: silvercrown: 1st Exterior Rendering Competition

Post by silvercrown on Sun Feb 07, 2010 6:59 pm

ryansantos wrote:dami ng sumasali ha!..nice view and environment scene...but your concept is too far from reality....siguro pwedi pa dyan kung light house or parola....isip kapa ng ibang concept...good luck nalang sayo and to all participants!

Thanks for your comments master ryansantos...
Prelim renders palang po yang nakikita nyo master, iba po presentation nyan sa final...
baket po too far from reality yung concept ko? Very Happy nakakatawa naman po kayo master...
iba po yata interpretation nyo sa poem, hindi dahil "The Light Wraps You" yung title e kelangan parola or lighthouse na yung subject... ahahaha... funny master ryansantos...
di po literal pag-interpret nyan, metaphors po yan... anyway don't bother po master ryansantos, at di nyo rin po yan maiintindihan.... Twisted Evil

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Re: silvercrown: 1st Exterior Rendering Competition

Post by ryansantos on Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:33 pm

silvercrown wrote:
ryansantos wrote:dami ng sumasali ha!..nice view and environment scene...but your concept is too far from reality....siguro pwedi pa dyan kung light house or parola....isip kapa ng ibang concept...good luck nalang sayo and to all participants!

Thanks for your comments master ryansantos...
Prelim renders palang po yang nakikita nyo master, iba po presentation nyan sa final...
baket po too far from reality yung concept ko? Very Happy nakakatawa naman po kayo master...
iba po yata interpretation nyo sa poem, hindi dahil "The Light Wraps You" yung title e kelangan parola or lighthouse na yung subject... ahahaha... funny master ryansantos...
di po literal pag-interpret nyan, metaphors po yan... anyway don't bother po master ryansantos, at di nyo rin po yan maiintindihan.... Twisted Evil

kasi walang magtatayu ng ganyang klasi ng tower sa lugar nayan...siguro pwedi pa kung parola or lighthouse kasi parang dagat or lake yung nasa scene.....im not refering to your poem,,but on your scene at hindi kurin yan ininterpret .....Opinyun lang naman ang sa akin,,,,bawal ang pikon dito master...kayo ang nakakatawa at very funny kasi hindi kayo marunong tumangap ng critics,,,

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Post by silvercrown on Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:48 pm

ryansantos wrote:
kasi walang magtatayu ng ganyang klasi ng tower sa lugar nayan...siguro pwedi pa kung parola or lighthouse kasi parang dagat or lake yung nasa scene.....im not refering to your poem,,but on your scene at hindi kurin yan ininterpret .....Opinyun lang naman ang sa akin,,,,bawal ang pikon dito master...kayo ang nakakatawa at very funny kasi hindi kayo marunong tumangap ng critics,,,

Huh? napaka-kitid naman po ng imahinasyon nyo master ryansantos... no wonder at parola lang at lighthouse laman ng imahinasyon nyo... palawakin po hehehehe
anyway salamat po ulit sa "criticism" (yan po ang correct word, di po "critics") Twisted Evil

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Post by cloud20 on Sun Feb 07, 2010 8:15 pm

Yun oh... Twisted Evil


Iwas OT; nice concept po master Cajun... At least ikaw nagtry sumali. Di rin biro yan ha hirap kaya magisip ng concept tapos i execute ito... Mag "critics" madali lang...

wokdatok...

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Post by cloud20 on Sun Feb 07, 2010 8:25 pm

3dpjumong2007 wrote:si cloud asan na? di dapat exempted mga senior nito he he he he! Very Happy abangan ko bro ang banats mo.. Very Happy

Huy heneral di na ako pepwede dyan napaglipasan na ako... Suspect

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Post by 3dpjumong2007 on Sun Feb 07, 2010 8:56 pm

cloud20 wrote:
3dpjumong2007 wrote:si cloud asan na? di dapat exempted mga senior nito he he he he! Very Happy abangan ko bro ang banats mo.. Very Happy

Huy heneral di na ako pepwede dyan napaglipasan na ako... Suspect

nyahahaa ha!pareho lng tayo master cloud !ako challenge ko ito as cad modeller imomodel ko tubig and isang planet...sana matapos ko ito... matapos ko kaya Suspect

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Post by deonbaby21 on Sat Feb 13, 2010 11:17 pm

grabe ang pressure d2 sir..kaya m yan..i'm still a student anu p kaya ehh master k na!!!guud luckk rock n' ROLL hippie

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