mang inasal...

mga master pa cc lng po... mga rush lng po mang inasal branches... su+vray+ps

sir comment lang po (IMHO)

ung line of mga tao dapat yata ung eyel level nila 1 lang ung reference point ng horizon ( fig 1 )

use camera correction on figure 2, slanting ung right portion ng wall?
adjust UV mapping ng sidewalk, malaki yata? medyo mataas ung sidewalk
background picture does not blend well....

halatang nakalutang ung mga tao

mapping of textures are flat.....

same comments here.....

auz mga masters tnx po apply ko po yung mga comments nyo po ^^

galing

approved sakin eto.sarap din kuamin daw dyan.tunay ba?konting adjustment lang eto sir pasok na sa panlasa nila

sa palagay ko kung pinagtuunan pa ng pansin to. it has really the potential to become good render. materials especially needs attention. i hope you have time to update them.

Agree dn ako kay sir after dark, lagay klng nang ruler sa ps, dn nka level ung mga tao nang tao, para d xa nkalutang tingnan.. dn ung guess vertical shift par maayos ung view nang camera.. anyway nise design chibugan na...

marami pang pwedeng gawin para mas mapaganda ang perspectives mo sir..agree ako sa lahat ng nagbigay ng kumento...i'll give you some of my personal comments:
1. levels of people is wrong
2. background is bad
3. tweak on camera angle
4. lights and shadows of the people does not match your main lighting.
5. needs reachness on the image, kailangan ma feel na restau ang gusto mong ipakita. i would put the people inside instead.
6. mapping adjustment issues.
7. i would rather put 1 big signage of "inasal" on every side rather than repeating it.

IMHO lang po ang lahat ng yan sir.

for my sugestion naman, tingin tingin lang siguro ng magaganda references para may basis ka sa gusto mong ipakita.yun lamang po...

kayang-kaya yan sir!...keep it up!

thanks mga masters...kaya stick ako d2 sa cgpinoy dami kong matutuman ^^... tnx talaga mga masters...

proportion lang ang kulang dito.tiling ng ground gaya ng sabi ni afterdark medyo tagilid ang horizon level.tyagaan lang talaga pag update para makuha mo.maperfect mo rin to bro.

comments had been said bro... keep posting