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Post by a.espinosa on Mon Nov 17, 2008 10:46 am

--first time to post for the all the masters here to C&C (sorry po kung mali gawa ko ng pag-post)






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Post by Butz_Arki on Mon Nov 17, 2008 10:53 am

i like ur landscaping bro..give more life lng s scene like yung pgllgay ng fountain..wala kcing tubig eh..yung tiling nung ibang parts...mliliit..orange and green color..ok lng pro mas ok cguro kung light orange lng..thats ur choice db..?un lng cguro bro..nice job p rin..keep posting. welcome to CGP

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Post by a.espinosa on Mon Nov 17, 2008 11:53 am

hahahaha,,,thanks mga bro at ok ang pag-post ko..di ako naging engot sa pag-upload...comments are noted..thanks guys...insprisyon ko mga gawa nyo ..kaya ako continuing to learn

alex

sir butz...actually the perimeter wall..existing n e..ayaw na papalit kulay..so i just blend in..about the water feature, di ko mapalabas maayos yung sa wall e....hmmm..any suggestion ng pag-gawa ng waterfall..other comments noted na po...thanks po

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Post by render master on Tue Nov 18, 2008 11:58 am

a.espinosa wrote:...actually the perimeter wall..existing n e..ayaw na papalit kulay..so i just blend in..about the water feature, di ko mapalabas maayos yung sa wall e....hmmm..any suggestion ng pag-gawa ng waterfall..other comments noted na po...thanks po


nice to see you here sir.....dont worry sir, post ko iyong waterfall tutorial ko here.

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Post by render master on Tue Nov 18, 2008 12:04 pm

comment ko lang sa mga cushion considering outdoors scene ( sabagay sa loob ng isang taon 2-3 times lang yata umuulan dito) i would prefer kung leather ang gagamitin

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Post by render master on Tue Nov 18, 2008 12:15 pm


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Re: Outdoor seating- first post on cgpinoy

Post by Guest on Tue Nov 18, 2008 12:20 pm

a.espinosa wrote:--first time to post for the all the masters here to C&C (sorry po kung mali gawa ko ng pag-post)



And this is my second post as well. I don't know if crits are allowed here but here goes:

I like the tones in general. Unfortunately the BG isn't giving it justice. There's a big leap in brightness between the background image and the foreground cg. You might also try to lessen the saturation so it doesn't look too cg'esque and the colors too crisp like they are about to jump out of the screen - Saturate it if you want to make the rendering one step higher the phorealism baramoter. But if you are feeling creative and aiming for a surreal appeal, then it is fine as it is.

No offense meant for ronel but I've just checked that tutorial and allow me to say, one should stay away from the particle route for fountains unless you are aiming for mists or showers...

You'd be better off using surfaces like animated planes masked with opacities and water maps...I think I'd also write a book about that Wink

Its nice to see familiar names here BTW.


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Post by princessjay on Tue Nov 18, 2008 4:38 pm

Hi sir, ang galing ng pagkacompose mo sa mga plants. Lighting is also perfect for me!!! galing sir!!! post mo pa yung ibang projects mo jan sir, ang dami mo kayang projects plus mga tabi-tabi pa. hehehe. wave

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Post by dickie_ilagan on Tue Nov 18, 2008 6:50 pm

nice environment and greeny scene, some added points lang... some plants cast with a overburn lighting, try adding also a specularity and glossines image map base on leaf plant maps so it would cast an uneven specular and glossiness.... it also adds photorealism and not feeling a dull moment... orange color on 1st image casts a bright tone against the color green, it maybe toning light intensity or limit the light bounces to a good value... try what works best for you, bro....

peace.. overall good job... Very Happy Smile

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Post by Juanchito on Tue Nov 18, 2008 7:34 pm

...a well composed vegetation, lightings are nicely done...but i would have to agree on sir renderworks, a leather might work well on your cushions...
...bottomline, these images are tough, man.... keep posting!
...btw "WELCOME TO cgp''...... ( i'm also a newbie here inuman na hippie )

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Post by bokkins on Tue Nov 18, 2008 9:18 pm

pano mo nagawa ung mga plants bro. I mean pano ang set-up mo? care to share? ganda nito. thanks and welcome to CGP Smile thumbsup

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Post by nyop on Wed Nov 19, 2008 12:33 am

very neat of render, just arrangement of plants and furniture, its that very crowded. Very Happy render great job

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Post by pakunat on Wed Nov 19, 2008 1:05 am

napakainviting sir. ganda ng composition. i admire your patience. post ka pa sir

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Post by jay3design on Wed Nov 19, 2008 1:12 am

nice render bro congrats ganda ng gawa mo, welcome d2 sa cgp keep posting Crazy_Lion

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Re: Outdoor seating- first post on cgpinoy

Post by a.espinosa on Wed Nov 19, 2008 8:39 am

v_wrangler
"You'd be better off using surfaces like animated planes masked with opacities and water maps...I think I'd also write a book about that"

-sir can you elaborate more yung process nito...your right pahirap ang particles...thanks for a very constructive comments...i'll try to adjust sir
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-idol hehehehe..wag k ingay...w8 n lang kita rito sa riyadh...
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-sir bokkins library ko lang po yun with vray mat (magalit mods pag sinabi ko rito) pm n lang sir if you want them--setup is vray mesh export power hehehehehe

thanks again mga master's sa walang sawang pagtuturo..glad to be back again here with you guys hippie hippie hippie

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