Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

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Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by Rhythem02 on Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:39 am

Hi, Guys here is my latest 3d port folio.

Below is the initial concept, as you can see it started out quite simple, but i couldn't help it I ended up doing lots of stuff even after the sculpting and during the retopology. This happens a lot to me most of the time after a few glimpse of the concept I easily get tired of it or i see something is not balance and ended up adding or changing all throughout the process.

The final pose will be posted later, rending just takes up lots of time.

C and C are mostly welcome.

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by reyknow on Fri Feb 26, 2010 8:42 am

galing! tska bilib ko sa concept, mula sa simple doodle napalayo mo yung concept 2thumbsup

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by Guest on Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:58 pm

sobrang makapal yata ang batok at ang laki ng ulo, maliit at flat ang kamay.malayo siya kung pinagbasehan mo yung proportion sa head units kahit pa stylized yung character.
hindi accurate sa gravity yung mga suot niyang elements sa bewang.improve mo pa yung lukot ng damit at anatomy ng katawan, bitin sa form..

maganda yung texturing, ok yung concept.ang lupet ng details.

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by Rhythem02 on Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:55 pm

Wow a really straight to the point comment, that's the reason we posts on forums thumbsup , I will definitely consider than doing the action pose. Thanks!

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by reyknow on Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:21 pm

post ka pa ng pics, mas maganda kung close up, sayang kung nde makikita yung details Very Happy

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by fpj999 on Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:08 am

comment ko lang yung head po medyo malaki

galing ng modeling skills nyo..sana maabot ko mga level nyo master Very Happy

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by Rhythem02 on Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:51 am

@reyknow - I will post more pics soon. I'm just applying new learned techniques and editing from few constructive critiques.
@fpj999 - you can do it as long as you can handle all the headaches and have the right attitude. Just like one 3d illustrator said:

"I believe that this fear is the power that makes my artwork possible.
I suppose that everyone wants to be a good artist.
Sometimes we hesitate,not knowing which one is correct,and worrying about whether I have the talent or the right aptitude everyday.
To become a good illustrator or animator, we need talent.
However, I think that the best talent is patience. " - Kjun

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by Rhythem02 on Thu Apr 08, 2010 1:06 pm

Here is the Final Image...Posing

Sorry if it took sometime to post this. I have considered few significant comments and this some changes.

First is the Scale and Proportion - from the previous post the head is big and the body is too rigid, does not resemble a real human scale. So I adjusted it to at least look like on his late teens and early 20s.

Second is the Skin - I did researched about how to properly project real Hi-Res pictures onto the model, and create believable texture.

Third is the Hair - Redone the hair and learned how to properly composite on photoshop.

This project is quite fun and artistically challenging. Looking forward to my next portfolio. I hope I would be able to land an entry level position with this.

Comments and Critiques are mostly welcome.


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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by kula_wende on Thu Apr 08, 2010 3:16 pm

huwow! astig brad! sa zbrush mo ba ginawa lahat ng details nyan??

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by LadiesMan217 on Thu Apr 08, 2010 3:21 pm

woooooooow astig sir grabeeh....
grrrrrr

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by Guest on Thu Apr 08, 2010 3:27 pm

asteg, nice.
maliit pa nga lang yung kamay lalo na yung mga daliri kulang sa volume,
mas lalong lumiit tignan yung kamay kasi pinakita mong may hawak siya,
archer siya kaya dapat mukhang malakas ang kamay at braso niya
ok sana kung may makikita kang tension sa grip sa bow.
isa pa yung pose mukha siyang malamya para sa title na warrior lalo pat maka feminine yung design ng damit niya mas nagmukha siyang mahina sa pose.

overall ok.

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by reyknow on Thu Apr 08, 2010 5:54 pm

ganda tol. pano mo nagawa yung buhok? post ka naman ng wires

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by boyluya on Fri Apr 09, 2010 9:21 am

Wow sir galing! Did you paint it over sa photoshop? I mean yun model mismo. Para kasing nasobrahan dude. Yung textures sa character sheet look different pagdating doon sa beauty shot.

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by Rhythem02 on Fri Apr 09, 2010 9:33 am

Everyone - Thanks for your comments and critiques all of this would serve as fuel for my next portfolio

@kula_wende - Only the concept, few retopology, transposition, and the projection of the skin onto the model were done on Zbrush, everything else is 3dsMax.

@pressure - thanks for your once again straight forward critique.

@reyknow - I'll try to find time to render the wires.

@boyluya - The character sheet that I posted and the beauty shot are in a way different since there were major changes done since the first post. None were paint over in photoshop except for color correction, because I seem to lean on a darker palette when lighting the scene to achive subtle shadow.

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by bokkins on Fri Apr 09, 2010 9:39 am

Everything is superb except the pose. It's a girly pose for a masculine archer. Maybe you should reconsider that. Dapat matipuno ang stance. chest out at malapad ang coverage. Right now, mukha syang mahinhin at very fragile.

But then again, superb modeling, texturing and rendering. 2thumbsup

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by corpsegrinder on Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:01 am

yes he look so gay, pati na rn ung suot nya sa waist girlaloo... But overall ang galing ng pgkagawa ng model! master na master. thumbsup buttrock

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by Rhythem02 on Fri Apr 09, 2010 12:47 pm

For the latest comments thanks

about the pose and the theme. Seeing archers on movies specially Japanese animation, they are the kind of figure that are sensitive and feminine. So I guess I got that perception, and interpreted very strongly on this image.

I'll try to interpret better on my future portfolios, but for now I'm happy with this.

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by orcgod on Sun Apr 11, 2010 9:37 pm

really good for your portfolio. keep it up1

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by Brother on Mon Apr 19, 2010 8:04 pm

Lupit ng pagkakagawa!!! about the posing, hindi naman lagi machocho ang mga warrior Very Happy lalo na nga sa japanese animation...nakuha ko point mo. Yoong kamay nga lang medyo maliit nga ata...pero ang bagsik ng buhok ha!

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by marcelinoiii on Tue Apr 20, 2010 11:13 am

bokkins wrote:Everything is superb except the pose. It's a girly pose for a masculine archer. Maybe you should reconsider that. Dapat matipuno ang stance. chest out at malapad ang coverage. Right now, mukha syang mahinhin at very fragile.

But then again, superb modeling, texturing and rendering. 2thumbsup

Sir bokks, I think you have a very considerable side of idea for an Archer... but for me, more often, Archers are meant to be slim and petite in terms of character designs and concepts, as they fight in long range... mostly seen in most movies or animations. unlike warriors like swordsmen for instance, being a close range fighters, they are intentionally big in proportion in character designs and concepts... So I think this Archer's built and design is nicely done in terms of concept and design, from the built, costumes and stance, the artist was able to capture a typical archer from the looks and feel. Also, this character may have been designed for a purpose in the story or game, who knows...

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by nahumreigh on Tue Apr 20, 2010 6:18 pm

ang galing sir sobra... design, modelling, texturing... ang prob ko lang siguro yung sa archer pose niya. Wala to kinalaman kung feminine o masculine yan, nasa sa yo yan. Yun lang sa armguard eheh. Nakalagay yung arm uard dapat sa kamay na nakahawak ng bow. Protection siya kasi against dun sa "pitik" ng string. Sayang ganda pa naman nung arm guard... well anyway... AWESOOOOME pa rin mehn eheh

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by Archi.Karl on Sat Apr 24, 2010 9:50 am

Ayos to sir! Nagwo-work ba kayo sa Gaming Industry? Astig.

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Re: Oriental: Warrior of the Wind

Post by Rhythem02 on Sat Apr 24, 2010 12:01 pm

@Archi.Karl - I actually quit my job last december as Buyer/Planner in a manufacturing company just to focus all of my time in 3d modelling.

I'm searching at the moment. But it's quite hard to find a job here in the Philippines.

I hope I don't end up on the same position I left for. If everything fails maybe I'll purse my course I took in college which is computer science, and put 3d modeling on back burner for a while .

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